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Hey Can I read your story? ok sounds greeeat

Um....Hi it's me Shade remeber? How's your life been going, good I hope. Anyways message me when you get the chance.

Hello
I havn't talked to you in ages :)

You know, you can always get a beta to read over your work and correct any spelling mistakes you have. It'll make reading your stories much easier.

oooh, so many colors on ur page :D awesome. I'll try to read ur story :D but otherwise thnx for welcoming me :]

Heey, i was just profile surfing and decided to comment, i was wondering if you would mind checking out my new Jacob Black story. It would mean absolutely Loads (:

http://stories.mibba.com/read/229659/Il-Be-There-For-You/

Theres the link x

http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/151753/
Enter my contest please
ill read all your stories

Hola! Remember me? I have a new story up and it would mean a lot to me if you would read it.

I am playing the random comment game and by reading this, you are too. Here's how it works: I post a comment on people's profiles, they respond within 24 hours, then they continue the chain...Have a nice day :D

Sorry if I sounded harsh. I didn't mean to be insulting. I just wanted to point out that in your story, in the Author's Note, you sound very judgmental and that could be very offensive to other people. Again, I'm sorry for how I sounded.
~Erin

Oh, for everyone reading this lay the hell off of her spelling, you don't know whether that's an issue for her or not. Let it go, the spelling isn't what makes her story, it's all the heart she puts into it. So really, if you don't like it, correct her nicely, don't whine about it on her page. D:

Seri! It's Jojo. Long time no talk! :] how have you been? =]

Really you're 20 and you don't know how to spell? Please for everyones sake learn how to spell before you write anymore.

Hey, I don't mean to be a bitch, but I would appreciate it if, before you write anymore stories and/or poems, that you use spell check. And secondly, it would be very wise of you to stop trying to harass people whom may think differently than you.

If you choose to disagree with me, that's fine, I just thought I'd give my two cents.

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HI!!!!!!!!! XD omigawd we haven't talked in FOREVER!!!!!!! (lolz..)

hey remember me? message me when you get the chance

Npee chickz

lol, i very happy you enjoy them:)