My new, first and only story.

Hey guys.. I need a favor. I wrote a story but I'm quite unsure about it.. I'm a new author, English isn't my native language so I'd like you to read and comment it.. I want to know if it's good enough.I wrote about 4 chapters, can you tell me if it's smart idea to continue or I should just drop it?Thank you, I appreciate the time you'll take for it.
September 12th, 2007 at 12:41am

Helena a.k.a Sherlock.

Helena.When I first heard that name I was like, wow.. She's got the power. I was stalking her for months. Luckily we live very close. Then I decided to confess my love to her. She was saying horrible things to me. She said that I'm creepy retard who likes to scare little girls, that I belong into prison and stuff like that, but I honestly believe that she will see the truth one day - that I'm only...
July 16th, 2007 at 01:20am


My first ass-journal. It looks assy. :] I like asses, but asses are overrated. Ass - the symbol of assenes.. Like awesomeness - but it's ass. Just a small ass. Little cute ass. God I love ASSES!Can't live without asses. Bye, my sweet asses.
July 15th, 2007 at 11:39pm