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Ohh I notcied which is something amazing, not many people are like that its like a miracle when u find a friend who get mad at every little dumb thing...

Now I'm not trying to be mean, but I swear to go americans are just about the.... I'm not even gonna finish. Like ok, before I moved here if heard of the different system but like white people they have zero idea something different out there like cm & meters exsist, I'm not even kidding. Sometimes people make me wonder lol

Well atleast its better than nothing, you have to start somewhere & move up haha maybe in 10 she let u go down the park by ur self... lol jk jk bcus it most certainly seems ur free or working ur way towards it

My little brother is a total wild freak, australia this australia that this animal here this beach there he's dream in life is just see some of australia he is obsessed its freaky, I bet he would love to live with u lol, can I ship him off? He is too annoying for me & keepin him in the backyard would make him happy haha your very lucky to live in such a beautiful place.

& thanks to my big brother, I get the privilige to go places people dream about, if my parents have enough money take the whole herd with them we go some where friendly like london or italy but ever since I moved to the us, we stayed in the country, I been to florida, hawaii & las vegas which I have to say is just as u describe it, its one of the few places that's just exactly as the pictures show

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That's another thing I hate, people always want the truth but it has to be sugarcoated which I think is ridiculous. I just don't understand why people can't deal with a little honest to goodness hurtful truth if they ask for it all the time, we are all hypocrites in the end lol

Well see I'm not from the US, I moved here 5 years ago so I totally know how the metric system works & why I'm passig chemistry lol & oh wow its so cold here that my mom went & bought a bed for these 2 cats my neighbors had & left out on the street bcus she felt bad, I still can't get over that lol all bcus ur under the equator mind boggling right? I mean if u were might rich & don't like a season just fly out the country lol

I only seen a little of snow so ur luckyy were do u go? It sounds fun!! Mother needs her babies every where with her everywhere even if we are not babies, enjoy freedom lovely(:

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glad to see you agree i mean people have to know that not everybody is gonna agree with them & such.

It really is! the whole spinning on its axis just sounds ridiculous lol no one goes to the beach unless there is a bonfire with lots & lots of fire lol & no on goes camping or anything of that sort, everyone is inside their house thanking heaters. its like a death wish if you go camping haha i never seen a white Christmas though, i live in Houston so its right on the gulf of mexico & we see snow faintly every three years only but i would love to see snow like full on the holiday, thats one of the things fairytales dont kid about: its definitely magical.

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I hate it don't u? I understand u have to worry about offending someone bcus u know that should be drilled into people, u have to be somewhat nice & kind but how can one live if EVERYTHING they say is just to please some else & we have to worry about what others think 24/7 , there is definitely a line to that...

& ahhh ok, sorry for my slowness! You're right!! I have been to places around europe & travelled around the US, but I have never went below the equator so I only expiernce the time difference which years of travelling makes it seem like nothing, I think its super fascinating how right now its hot where u are when here you can see your breath, I can't even imagine a new years without wearing boots and scars while you probably have like bikini parties lol god the world is too huge... & that means summer for you is coming up right? Excited maybe for another story perfect summer?? (;

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true especially since i have no idea where you're going with it.

see i totally knew that!! i even told my mother & she was all like that 'what kinda shit are you saying this time? dont say this in public, people are gonna make fun of you' everything to her is what people say i swear... i totally knew our summer is ur winter & vice versa.. so ok start of summer as in YOURS?

thats even better really, it will be more interesting & not rushed at all thats perfect(:

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yup, too personal to put. which is fine, bcus i think when its like a 'secret' (well not necessarily a secret just not the whole world knows about it) its extra special, & you wanna hold on to that.

BEFORE? omg im over here thinking that this is after the summer & the story is gonna go back & tell their 'tale' (i had to XD) but the second chapter kinda throw that off a little, so i see what your saying, i guess there is a whole new other guy then??

slow is GOOD. i HATE when people skip like a month between chapters & they recite or tell things that happen instead of it being happening as the chapter go it frustrates the life outta of me, i like being IN the action... does that make sense? besides summer stories are always fun(:

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well like you said, for entertainment purposes there has to be some exaggerations unless your summer was THAT amazing & you dont have to make up anything bcus its all there. It seems very dear to you, so i think your gonna make it close to the truth but you know u can still play around with it & make it real... it depends with what you're comfortable with if you want people knowing about it or keeping some of the memories to yourself you know?

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it was definitely worth the excitement, it feels you have a lot in store for it & i bet your super excited for every chapter since you know its special. I love the protagonist put on love, i swear i would have put it the same way(;
i guess that why i love your stories so much, you say what i want lol
Great job:D

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it sounds great, especially since you got some major talent going for you im sure you're gonna perfect it! you got me all excited & hyped up to read it haha

what is the point of writing something predictable & cliche? if the readers are gonna know whats going to happen next they might as wel not continue reading if they can guess on their own, the whole point is to draw you in & keep you wanting more which you obviously have that to science.

its hard thinking of new idea like the MAIN plot idea, like arranged marriages or teacher student, rich & poor, teen pregnancy, all these ideas base a novel & its ok to use & over use them bcus its hard to come up with a totally new original idea bcus mostly everything has been used but i understand why people have to go ahead & use cliche characters & events, those two should be your own & its not that hard to come up with them...

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it is safe to say that yeah, & don’t worry! it will NOT be a flop!! you have SERIOUS talent its impossible for you to write anything shitty! Get it through your head, don’t make me find you! lol

good to know good to know, I just don’t understand people who lean on other people & don’t have a back bone, so I will FOREVER love everything you write!

True, well said. How do you know your gonna hev that love for YOU? some people day without finding the ‘right’ person, love is just something that sounds ideal & keeps people on their toes, its definitely way to exaggerated for & that’s why I only love it in stories to a certain degree…
you really excited about your new project right? now I cant wait for it!

& good to know haha I don’t wanna annoy your or waste your time(:

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oh damn, what kinda readers you got? since his is a mafia one maybe readers in gangs? write about rainbows next time XD haha

oh yeah!! do you what the most thing i like about the story? is that A & E didnt fall in love from chapter 3, it actually DEVELOPED realistically rather then fairy talely! you have no idea how much i HATE unrealistic things, that & cliche characters! i barely read anymore bcus i pick up something & see that shy damsel in distress & hottie jock with blonde cheerleader girl friend & it makes me what to kill the world, why the fuck do people have to stoop to stereo types?! oh i get worked up just thinking about it... there is nothing i hate more in the this damned world other then labeling & judging... which is why you get a million dollars for staying away from those things(:

thats good! you do NOT wanna get attached to a character, its bad for your health, causes lack of sleep haha
here we go again, we are gonna get attached to this new character & your gonna get death threats, you signed up for this! Even Just in Case was like ima delete my account & not read your next story bcus she doesnt like being obsessed & she blames me for causing this, i threatened to find her & her family if she doesnt read it lol

im not necessarily anti love, i just dont believe in it to a degree again im such a realist! we are definitely 2 peas in a pond... & oh yeahh i could definitely tell! otherwise E & A woulda fell in love from chapter 5 & had a baby chapter 6, thank god your anti love, i was starting to think im lonely in this world to not like people falling in love so quickly & it definitely explains why you do it, bcus im at chapter 32& aside from having sex twice on drunken out of their mind states my characters dont even like each other haha (sorry for my long comments, im a pain i know)

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you had it coming lol
& lol i think you did have to alter some things around... those were some pretty serious threats XD
& thats what i like about this story, your actually writing about something 'bad', most writers can go there you know. bad to them is smokin, yet sex before marriage & alcohol is a sin & forbidden in almost all religions its ok, people just that whatever they want & decide whats good or bad but i like how you have a harsh reality once again are you following me? i have good ideas i just never know hoe to get them out & make them sound like they are in my head lol

& not really mean its not long before prince charming comes in & fixes everything, it IS a refreshing change but did dear ethan had to be the one to take the leap? but blame on you for making such characters, i was NEVER attached to a character the him & Amelia, not even in published books which have you ever read Perfect Chemistry? i cry every time i read it but i never really NEEDED them to be together or the world wont be the same like MTTM, when the guy got shot in it i got over it & was like thats life but with Ethan he just NEEDS to be alive, im not getting over it i guess maybe bcus amelia & him did get all the lovey dovey experiences out?

& haha i think i figured out the had way you dont believe in love. its for weak people who need something to wake up to in the morning... im not saying there isnt love, but its not in the degree people write & talk about, thats all fairy tales & wishful thinking & the ideal way it should be...

wel now you know how much he means to us. ALOT, if he dies we die with him haha i truly CARE about him & amelia...

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keeping our nice perspective in thought, im not going to respond to that. oh hell yes i am... you made a whole new story just to kill ethan?! i know its your story & you do what you want & by all means kill who ever you want but WHY? he is so lovely, i swear he is by far one of my favorite ever characters!! i love how protective of amelia & his family he is. & i wouldn't be lying when i tell you that i reallly got butterflies when i read about him & Amelia together even if it was just a kiss to the forehead, i always became a tingly giggly mess. There relationships makes me feel something while when i read about other couples im like 'ok this lovey dovey routine is wwearing off on me, when are they gonna fight?!' lol but really no one effected me as much as they did...

dont even think about it, because dont you notice ideas come to YOU, when you actually sit there & think its like bleeh but you get stuck with a stroke of genius in the least expected times? forget the ending & let a stroke of genius smack dap crash into you(;

& no no no, once again you deserve it & more(:

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Its just the truth(:
It was actually.... can't find the word but I guess you can say professional?? It shows your a great writer and isn't just putting words to make sentences but actually put thought & devotion into it you know what I'm saying?? Lol

I think that's the best way, bcus when I think to much I tend to rush the chapters so I can get to the good stuff which is not fair and again it makes you panick and edgy.

Whaaaaaaaaaa?! You don't need to worry about that! You are truly a fantastic writer everything you write will NOT be bad, how can it be when your so amazing?? Let me tell u its impossible(: & I'm not just saying that to be nice or anything its the straight truth..(:

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We need reassurance!! I'm glad you actually put that, its actually very clever but putting you're the author in prepective once again we have to have our doubts about what exactly is gonna happen haha we can't get too excited!

Take it ONE chapter at a time, when you look farther ahead & such you panic, don't think to much about the ending and just focus on the chapter your working on not even the rest & slowely its gonna all fall together to create an epic amazing ending. When you think about the future & plan beforehand its always frustarating that's why but if go with the flow it will come to you! Especially since you don't wanna rush the ending...

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Oh yes, no one can say the word sure & positive about MTTM, bcus the exact oppisote happens & when have early high blood pressure your the one to blame ha

Calm the mind of yours, we can only take half an idea at a time & espically ethans death will last a life time you can't throw something else at us lol we're griefing you kno? Lol

But I can really tell, it doesn't even seem like you don't want to fo forever actually the chapters are so exciting and such it seems you do wanna write it forever ends but that's good job on ur part bcus when someone is ready to wrap a story up you sense it in the chapters, the get boring & is a repeat of the same thing over & over.

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Well I give the credit to google, I wentt through like 20 search pages till I found it lol. I'm just happy about what it stands for, now my hopes are sky high again. So much for my sit back and just go with the flow plan lol

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Harry gordan faked his own death for like 7 years??

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I figured it out. I figured it out. I figured it out. I figured it out!!

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Well I can see why, trust me after everyone is done reading the chapter they were to busy OMGing about it!! I really couldn't thinkk at all after I was finished, its such a shock and I don't think I can make a clear thought until next chapter, but that will only last long enough for me to finish readin the new chapter until I see the new cliff hanger you leave us with and its a cycle over again.... you are so cruel!

Thank you so much(': it really means the world to me coming from you!! You're the best:D

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