@ XXXataktoulaXXX You're reading my story? Thank you! I'm glad you like it :) It won't be finished yet, I still have a few more chapters to post, but I'll be updating it very soon.
@ SadieJBlue If you need help with a new layout, then maybe I can help you. I've made a few layouts for a couple of other people, including my own.
I haven't gone far enough into the story to find out about John, but I will. And even if she's attracted to mobsters of all kind, she should still describe something about them that lets the reader know that the guy may not be very pretty, but she still can't resist a mobster. I think I need to find a few of the cute ones myself when I go back to Manhattan in December :)
I am really glad you enjoyed reading it so far. I am planning on getting a new layout soon - I have taken your idea's into account. I definitely want something darker, maybe more lustful and expensive. It's just trying to persuade my editor to go along with it.
As for all the attractive mobsters, not everyone is like that, for example her father, Demetri or John (if you've gotten that far!). Even Mr. White is based more about charm, being an older man. However Sadie's the type of girl, a little bit... hm... slutty? I don't know if that's the right way to describe her. Anyway she's the type of girl that finds all mobsters attractive, she's just drawn to them naturally. And plus, most Italian's are rather handsome to me - it's in the genes!
Anyway, I hope that you enjoyed it and I hope that you might consider continuing on to the end and thank you for your ideas, Love S.J Blue xxx
I'll probably just use one banner for a long time, so it'll be part of the layout...if you want to make a banner with your own colors, I'll change my layout. I can't make layouts... :|
Yup, I do. Great, I like giving full reviews on stories so expect one once you are done.