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Yeah, I agree about the summary. I'll probably go and join that all together later on. If you can't tell, I'm really not that great at summaries :p
And the dialogue is meant to be kind of cheesy. That and the "dreamers" thing go hand in hand with one of my only stable ideas with the story. The point of that will come out later as the story develops, so I get being put off by it at first.
You're very right when you say it's different from my usual stories. It's almost a challenge to write because I'm not used to it. But I'm glad you found it refreshing :)

I took your advice again and changed the layout for my story Be My Hero.
:)

Oh you didn't come off as a bitch, but I get where you're coming from. I am so honest in comments that sometimes I feel like the author would rather shank me than thank me.

Well thank you. That's certainly nice to hear :)

Thanks for the comment on "Honey". I definitely agree with you on the layout. I cringe every time I see it because I hate it, but I've just never gotten around to changing it.
And I don't doubt anything you said about content. I wrote it at two in the morning and thought it up in a half-asleep stupor, so it's certainly not too creative. I think it would have been a whole lot better a story and would have had more of a twist to it if I'd explained why she was crying, but my brain wasn't working that well when I wrote it, haha.
I'm actually surprised that you thought my writing was good in this. I honestly only put it up for a comment swap because I was curious of what anyone would think about it. It's definitely not one of my best stories, that's for sure.
But thank you again anyways :) And I'm glad you were completely honest with it and as detailed as you were. I hate nothing more than short and/or insincere comments.

Thanks a ton for commenting on my story, Chronological Chaos. Your comment was so nice and detailed and it made me very excited! I had to stop reading it and go back to it later so that I could calm down

I really glad you like it though, and I’m happy you noticed the names; I carefully picked them out to go along with each character’s personality. I also find German really sexy and I’m learning it now so I was like ‘why not put it in there?’

Thanks again so much; you just really made my day!

Thank you for the comment on my story, The Extraordinary Tale of Luna Hunt. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the sarcasm in it, haha. I also took your advice and re-did the layout.

SISSY ~ *huggles* I miss you too. I've been good. I moved to a house with friends.
It's okay, I understand. I had bad internet/no internet before.
I can't wait to talk more.

hi <3

no worries. home from Isssis?
Tell me all about your Isisey adventures, love dove. <3
Are you happy or worried about going home, and do you feel changed?

ok I don't even want them
you can have all of mine *throws them at your face*

okay speaking of your face let me just say:
omg <3 the way your mibba profile picture is angled/colored/placed...
you are amazing. <3 beautiful too.

bb ;-;

woah hi how is new mibba working out for you?
& what are those awards on our profile for? :B I'M A CHAMP.

;-; misakiii

I think you have offered, some yes <3
but is there one-
one really really special one, that always wins you?
<3

Recommend some awesome anime/manga, but with well-developed and really cool characters that you form an emotional connection with, for me to watch. <3 <3

love you bb <3

Happy birthday!
I hope it's super amazing and awesome because even though we never talk, you deserve the most amazing birthday ever

Lary, I love you. I might be a little early, but I want you to know that I hope you have an absolutely happy birthday. I know things aren't all that amazing, but I hope you make the best of it, cos you know I'll always be here to help make sure of that. I love you so much, and I wish you'd move yer butt up here so I could show you how much. But I digress, I hope your birthday is filled with smiles and love, because you deserve all of the smiles and love in the world. Happy birthday, sweetheart.

hey, bb. <3

Not yet. Not yet. Please, hun. Please be okay.

I love you.
<3
Box of Mox.

You are welcome. <3 I know right? The Bamboo Grove is amazing. Seriously. ~ Aw, shucks.
You don't have too. But you give me enough. Being so sweet and my friend is enough happiness to me. :) <3

Just keep thinking about all the wonderful places in Japan and you'll do fine.