April 17th, 2011 at 06:41pm
Awww. No problem:) And thank YOU for writing such an amazing story. hahaha. It gives me something to look forward to when you do update. So you're definitely the one to thank!
I totally agree with the whole Riley's point of view thing. It kind of shows that she thinks she's awkward and everything but then her actions are a little bit shifted from what she thinks. It goes along with that saying;; People see you differntly than you see yourself. A lot of the time your biggest critic is yourself. That most definitely is the case with Riley. Well, that's what I think anyways. haha. If she was really socially awkward then she wouldn't have friends, right? Nick's layers, oh my goodness! That was sooo amazing. haha. Don't get offended or anything but it kind of reminded me of Shrek. How him and donkey are like walking thourgh that field of onions and Donkeys talking about how Shrek's all guarded and blah blah blah. And then Shrek holds up the onion and tells Donkey that Ogres are like Onions. haha.
Aww. I feel so special, getting a little insider information. haha. So Nick is paranoid about something? Hmmm. If so then that totally makes sense. You know, why he's nice to Riley and then suddenly he goes back to his mean ways. Ahhh...Nick:) I love the way you've written him. He's soo nice but so masculine. He's kind of like my perfect guy in this story. Well...when he's being nice. haha.
I understand the Peter thing! When I write a 'villian' into my story people start off hating him/her immediately. It's only because they want Nick and Riley to end up together that people don't like Peter. That's why I don't like him, personally. hahaha. That and he seems suuuper sketchy. But he WAS at a club. I mean...people get crazy in the club.
Keep the cutesy parts! I loooove them so much:) They're soo...cute! ahahaha. You actually should put MORE of them in! They're to die for.
Well Shrek WAS right. I mean we all are kind of more than what we seem. It's true for almost everybody. Shy people are really out-going but they just don't want to be judged. Out-going people are really shy they just don't want to be alone. There's always more to someone but not everybody looks or thinks deep enough. Donkey is thee best Donkey without a doubt:) Man, I loved him back in the day. Shrek reminds me soo much of my childhood.
Nick totally can be mean. But most guys can so it's kind of understandable{Don't even know if that's a real word. haha}. Like the guys at my school...total jerks even though they're in cambridge. I mean he'd expect them to be a LITTLE nicer but no. They make fun of the girls all the time and tell them to shut up. I hate when guys do that. It's annoying and totally degrading. Nick does seem determined:) hehe. He needs to get with Riley already!!
Riley needs to get some confidence! She needs to totally stand up to Nick when he's mean to her. Even if they both have gone through a lot, it seems like, she can't let him talk to her like that!
I have a handful of friends. Not toooo much like; DANG! But I have a good amount. hahaha. I'm not overally out-going but I'm not mute shy. I don't think it matters what other people think. If you have one good friend and are completely happy then who cares how many friends you have, right?
:O They don't end up together until the sequel? Whhhhat?