Kayzi / Comments

And the Asterisks are a character change. ^^;

You have a good point. I know I need emotion and description, I just don't ... I can't figure out where to put it. And I do connect with Aimery on a stronger level than Aldonza. And I know the AAA's are confusing. I didn't realise it until after I had already named them. It just fit in my head that way, I have to take the pieces of the puzzle out and re-arrange them. Thank you, for the advice. ^^ :)

Aha. No. Prince of Drakaedia is not going to contain yaoi. Like Bran/Dren said, they have to find girls who understand that they're twins, ergo they're going to be close.

There just twins who are close and in Aimery's day and age, it's odd for them to be so /them/.

But, no, no yaoi. 3: No yuuri. 3:

Ah, well. Sure, if you want. :) I'm going to try and edit what you told me.

I might miss some [because I have ADHD and the like(not really, that's just my excuse)], but I will try my best! :D

Kayzi,

I can honestly say that your comment was very inspiring and it put me into a deep sense of thought. I do believe that i could add alot more detail into my story.

I wrote that story a long time ago in fact. I just put it on the internet just to see what would happen. And well, i must say, your comment was by far the longest, yet most encouraging one at that. I wrote that story when i was 13 years old. I wanted to improve it so much after i read your comment and realized, wow i've got no clue.

But back to the main topic, I thank you for your support. It is very appreciated.

Also, if you would like to help write my story, i would sincerely appreciate anything you've got. Because after this story is complete, I hope to not only make alot of friends along the way, but also become a better writer.

Again, thx for the comment. It really helped.

Signed,

AuraKnight

It was that bad. v.v Oh, dear.

Alright, thanks. :)

You did, I believe.

And my friend was wondering if you'd check out or co-write [b]Rule the World[/b]. There's a lot of chapters so that's okay if you don't wish to. :)

Dear Moses! O.O You sent me the biggest comment I've ever received!

And I don't mean that in a bad way.

Abou the past/present tense thing...I started out writing this story in present tense, decided not to, and went back and changed it so I probably missed a crap load! haha

But thanks so much for the advice and the comment! Its very, very appreciated! ^ ^

<3

I found it very interesting! :) And I love the story! Its awesome! I hope you update soon!

I actually just updated The Black Dragon...your comment must have prevoked me. haha

Well, I will read your story because I just read the thing on it. :) It sounds muy interesante!

Yes! :) We should. When I get upset with someone, instead of hurtling insults, I've tried to say something complimentary...It throws them off. haha

My story's in your favs! xD Thank you! <3

I very rarely find people like you...I LOVE YOU!!!!

Is that weird? xD

Vests...yes...xD

Thanks for the friend request! <3

That is [i]exactly[/i] what I think! Love everyone who God does...Love the sinner, not the sin. :) Its His job to judge, not yours. But many people can't figure that out...-.-

Yes, quite spiffy, indeed. x)

P.S. You sould like a very cool person because I just stalked your about me. xD

I feel the exact same as you on everything you said! x)

Arthur...*dies* I love him.

Alright, I shall seriously consider that. Thank you! :)

I understand where 'ninja' would throw a lot of people and I considered having it assassin instead...but ninjas are Japanese assassins so I was just sticking to it culturally.

But thank you very much for the comment and advice! <3

Thanks for the advice. I'll be sure to implement your suggestions when I start editing. :)

Oh no, stepping it up for the next comment. Should I be afraid? XD

Thank you for the comment! It's not very often that people on this site give constructive criticism, so I appreciate that. To be perfectly honest, I sort of agree with you. Without giving too much away, Snow isn't going to get as much, well, attention in the story as Rosenrot. Frankly, she's not going to be around much at all. I had to find some way of introducing her and bits of her character before the action started, and what better way than in the introductory chapter (which we've already established is going to suck anyway, haha). In the fairy tale(s) my story is based off of, they make a point of contrasting the sisters, so I just rolled with it. XD That's not to say that we won't ever see more of her, or that she won't have any character development what so ever, but I really just needed a way to quickly establish Rosenrot as the more rambunctious, wild child and Snow as a bit more quiet and reserved. I'm not just being lazy, I swear. XD

No, but really, thank you for your comment. And I'm sorry for the lengthy explanation that basically says nothing at all. Seriously though, please do keep up with the helpful comments; I think all of Mibba could benefit from a bit more criticism.

I just read your comment - thanks so much! No, she doesn't have powers, so I WILL fix that part. And she's manic depressive - is that how you say it? - and has had a few brushes with death. She's also reckless. That's why the bit about the brother and father. It's explained more later.

Thanks! It's been a while, though. I've gotten really good.