Okay, yes I've been over this a million times. I've changed things before and in the long run I'm never satisfied. I feel it's sloppy and badly written at times, but what bothers me most is the marriage thing. And I don't feel like I've put Gage at his full potential. He should be better, less weak. It's a little hard to explain how I feel about this story at the moment. Sooooo...I think I'm going...