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  • x.Kris.x

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    Thank you. I'm hoping all this shit works out as well. The truth is, I'm getting kicked out. So I have to figure out a lot of stuff...hopefully I'll find some time to read your other story though. I'm sure it's just as well written, even if the character is the complete opposite. Real writers can create totally different characters and still make it a rockin' story.

    But have fun on vacation! Enjoy, relax, and come back and share some anecdotes.
    June 16th, 2010 at 05:48am
  • x.Kris.x

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    That makes me really happy to hear! I mean, I do understand where you're coming from, but at the same time I believe your writing shouldn't be completely weighted on the feedback. What if it was awful, mean shit? There's always going to be the people who hate your work, and for me, I sort of put getting no comments in the same category as that. Constructive criticism is different, but when people are just plain rude and inconsiderate, you'd just ignore it, right?

    Hurray for you continuing to write! That makes me especially happy, which has been hard to come by for me recently. Hopefully the summer is treating you well, and you have more time to keep up with No Strings. I've been meaning to get around to reading your other stories too, so when I have a free moment you'll know =P Haha.
    June 13th, 2010 at 07:36am
  • x.Kris.x

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    Anyway, I hope everything's alright with you. When I have a spare moment, I'll swing by again and attempt to give you actual feedback on the story.
    June 12th, 2010 at 06:59am
  • x.Kris.x

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    I can't tell you what to do. I just expressed how I felt. It's up to you what to do.

    I'm not saying this to influence your decision, but I'd just thought I'd share what I was originally planning to do. I just read the last two chapters, and was all excited to comment on the new plot developments until I noticed that status. It just made me change my mind on what to point out. I'm sorry if it makes your comment board look bad though. I only realized how that could be perceived by other readers after I posted it. If you wanted to delete it, I'd understand.
    June 12th, 2010 at 06:13am
  • x.Kris.x

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    Haha, no problem! I love your story, and I'm glad I managed to give you some helpful feedback. Writing in third person does take a lot of work, since there are lots of things you have to consider that you normally wouldn't with first. And thanks, I'm glad you enjoy Friction. Hope you liked the last update; a new one should be coming soon!
    May 25th, 2010 at 12:11am
  • MsSynnieVengeance

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    You're welcome from the story comment. And as to what you said on your profile about not biting. You should bite its more fun!!! lol
    April 16th, 2010 at 05:54am
  • SinfullyDamaged

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    you're welcome. and yes it was amazing ^^
    March 10th, 2010 at 12:35am
  • CyFi

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    Thanks :)
    and, it's fine :P
    September 30th, 2009 at 04:22am
  • CyFi

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    :\

    I'm okay, I guess.
    It's going to be odd without him running around the house barking.
    September 17th, 2009 at 12:23am
  • CyFi

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    Yeah.
    I'm not in the best of moods.
    My dog just got ran over.
    September 16th, 2009 at 01:20am
  • CyFi

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    Oh, lovely.
    September 16th, 2009 at 12:21am
  • CyFi

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    What does BAMF mean? ._.
    September 14th, 2009 at 04:25am
  • RushKnob

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    Lmao, xD
    So whatdup?
    September 14th, 2009 at 04:09am
  • Lady Nikki Nightmare

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    haha see I'm kinda shy and I don't like being in crowds of
    people I don't know.. that's why it's interesting... and I call it
    college, but really it's like a two year school off a branch of
    the state college. (South Carolina USC)
    September 14th, 2009 at 03:35am
  • Luvstuffedanimals

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    awww that suckies!
    lol its k I'm a porcastinator too :P
    September 14th, 2009 at 03:33am
  • Lady Nikki Nightmare

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    it's pretty interesting here too lolz. I'm going
    through the transition from high school to college.
    September 14th, 2009 at 02:44am
  • Luvstuffedanimals

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    lol nothing much person i don't know
    just chillaxingg u?
    September 14th, 2009 at 01:47am
  • MGMTismyfundrug

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    lol wrong person XD
    Im Desiree ^_^
    September 14th, 2009 at 01:37am
  • MGMTismyfundrug

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    noyt much ^_^
    what about you
    September 14th, 2009 at 01:37am
  • CyFi

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    No, but I do like theirs songs Afterlife and Scream.

    Do you like Aiden? Smiley
    September 14th, 2009 at 01:30am