Would someone proofread something I wrote?

Would someone be willing to proofread a short story that I have written before I post it? It's for a contest, namely this one. It's completely written, I just want someone to proof read it for me.I still need to come up with a title, so if anyone wants to help me with that... haha. Just joking. Not really.It isn't often that I proofread anything, but this is slightly longer than anything I really...
October 23rd, 2011 at 11:53pm

It feels so good to let that out.

Ugh. I absolutely love him. Like, I’d do anything for him. Anything. He asks me to do something, I do it. I may be a little reluctant at first, but I do it. I mean, he’s talked me into doing so much shit for him. I stayed up all night with him once. I’ve showed him my messy ass room. I’ve changed my name to his last night on Facebook because we’re “married”. I’ve never lost that...
July 24th, 2011 at 12:09pm

To All My Lovely Readers;

Ah. AH!That's how I feel right now. Okay, out of all of my stories, Say You'll Haunt Me has, by far, been my most successful [one author] story. Yeah, It only has four stars, but that doesn't really matter to me. I have 141 readers, and I swear to God it wasn't that high when I logged off last night.The sequel to that, Another Chance, already has forty readers and thirty-five subscribers! I'm so...
November 15th, 2010 at 12:21pm