Emotional Wind / Comments

Hey, do you remember the open lantern, well it's come to my attention that some people got taken off and I didn't do it, at first I just assumed the people who were gone just left, but now I'm hearing differently.

So to make things clear I did not kick you off of The Open Lantern and if you are no longer on the authors list and you knew you were before and would like to rejoin, just tell me and I'll at you back or if you just want to join period, tell me and I'll add you.

Thanks for the comment. I'll take your suggestions! :) Did comment swap stop sending you to my story? Sometimes it does that to me too, even when I write 200 characters.

Hi thanks so much for your comment on Fatger to Daughter I just wish it was about my story and not legends. Sorry I sound rude but that comment ha done nothing to help me.

Thanks for the comment on "Eponey 1".
Guess I'll just have to go over this again, and again, every few comments.
Hmm, did I forget mention what they wear?
I just have to slip in something on that detail, somewhere.

*prequel

It makes sence if you read the sequel. Unless you mean Jason's chapters.

Don't worry about it. I posted a few times in comment swap and you seem to be getting the majority of the story - I think CS needs to work out a few more bugs.

Okay. I did notice I need to describe Tyler and his family more. I've just had a hard time figuring out how to do it subtly.
Can you tell me anything you LIKED about the story?

Thank you for the comment, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm very glad the naked couple was shocking - as they're supposed to be. Also, thanks for the advice, I'll make sure to go back and edit my chapters and all the ones to come. :)

Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I was trying to write from my heart and I feel like I did now. :)
Also I appreciate your advice, I'll try to fix that up. I'm new to Mibba, layouts are a whole new game. :P

I have no problem with people helping me, but dude really the whole point of a preview is to TELL what a story is about it's supposed to give things away. Now you may not know me as this user but I'm the guy who wrote Sharra: The Burning Kingdom. My username was Shatterix. Now it's Dragon Blade Studios.

hahahahahaha! awesome :3

i'm in year eleven now, wooh -.- wbu?
hope you're doing fabulous c:

hey can you please read http://poem.mibba.com/282521/Dear-Japan and comment i will return the favour.

Hey :D, i have a new journal called " a vegetarian between meals" and it would honestly mean so much to me if you read it, thank you so much and i hope things are well, if not im always here to talk

a comment in response to the one you left on 'Waiting For the End' in October... I don't check my account very often...

"First off, I'm amazed someone actually commented on this. O_O
Second, you're right, the descriptions ARE very plain and thin, and there is an explanation for that: I never edited it beyond simple spell-checker. There's a noticeable lack of big words and it's... well. It's not the best chapter in the history of chapters.

Thank you for responding with helpful advice, Mr. Wind, I really appreciate it."

hahaha awesome !
yeah nothing much aye, i havent been on lately, i got grounded LOL
hbu?? how was your Christmas? :3

http://stories.mibba.com/read/437472/Hold-Me-Close/

Hey I'm Fatima :)
Sorry for the late reply and thanks for the warm welcome!

hey hey buddyyy c:
i has not been on here for ageeeeeeees :L but i've written more stuff and decided it was time to jump back in :3
so i just wanted to say hey and find out if you still use this :L if so, we deffs need to catch up C:
write back yeah? :B

I added more to the story finishing the first chapter. Any opinions and thoughts what youd like to see happen further in thestory??