Emotional Wind / Comments

that's awesome dude

I know it took me a bit of time but I have read through some of your story and I like it.. When you fiish it try to get published and keep me updated. Ill be one the first to buy it. :))

Well when I read somebody's story, I don't just copy the same comment from somebody elses story, because everyone's stories are different and I find it quite offensive.

I would thank you for your comment, except it's spam. You've clearly not read any of the stories you've commented on, as you've just copied and pasted the same comment for everybody.

im going to be adding descriptions as i go along, that was pretty much a little thought going through my head, but i'll be editing the description as i go along :) But thanks for the comment none the less :D

Thanks for the comment, but since we're (or maybe just me?) kind of going for a little less decription and trying to make our story a bit fast-paced, we won't put much effort into too much details. I really like that you gave us constructive criticism. We really appreciate it, and your teaching skills are good =) And also your descriptions are as good. If I have the time, I'll maybe check out your story. Have a great day!

Thanks for the review it was my first story ever so yeah, I probably suck but I'm trying... I'll try to improve it! Thanks your the first person to give me useful tips!

Thanks for commenting. I see your point, and how it makes it better.
I blame my tiredness, seeing as I wrote it at 3 in the morning, but it would only be partly true, because in truth, I'm just not in a good enough mood to write at my best.

Thanks a lot for your comment! I see where you're coming from, I'll try to improve that :) we're just starting the story and comments like that help us a lot..
how about the rest of the story?

Thanks for the story comment :) I'll do that in the next chapters x3

Thanks for the constructive critisim. I've never written a story before, so it really helps out ^_^.

Thanks for the story comment on The collector. The input was helpful, but for a one-shot such as that I tend to leave out that much description because it makes the story too long, plus the character was supposed to be bleak and mysterious. But thanks for the advice I appreciate it :)

Thank you for commenting on my story. It was very helpful. I haven't written in so long that I'm having a hard time getting back into writing... Especially when it comes to detailing the story. I tend to leave detail out sometimes cause I just write by how I'm feeling and the first chapter will always come out plain.

Thanks for the advice bro, but that's not the way I write. My character is supposed to be a cold hearted bitch and that's the way I want it to sound. But, thanks for the comment :)

Thanks for the story comment, but I tend to not use as much description for drabbles. A lot of description isn't really needed for something that's less than five-hundred words (on Mibba), it's simply free writing when I'm stuck on one of my bigger projects. =] Thanks for the comment again.

Erm No >:(

ahh yes i see what you mean. thanks for the input
but for those type of stories - ya know what i mean - i feel like descriptions and eloquence may be incongruous (not saying stories should be bat shit story in title sort of thing) but for a story rated r-17, i think people would find it necessary for description of such things if they're not that relevant that moment in the story. Depending on the author though. if it were my dystopian or sci-fi stories, then of course my description would be hard out, vivid imagery.
i like your paragraph though; good way of writing. For me, it's cause a story like that is a fast-paced they do this and do that, then the end. not really my forte, i actually love detail and descriptions. but yeah, that's all i can give in those type of stories or else i'll feel like i'm rambling.. then again, it's like i'm just stating things and leave people with no imagination xD
anyway thanks again!

As long as we're on the helping out page, mind telling me how I can delete my own comment from my own story? :P Thanks again!

Thanks for clarifying. I'm new, and just getting into the whole story-writing.
Feel free to continue with the constructive criticism! I welcome all opinions!
Will read, after writing!

You commented on one of mine. Just saying, it's rated R, it can have cursing in it. If you don't like it, not gonna say I'm sorry.