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  • Gold Dust Woman

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    Thank you for the comment on Cosmic Love. :)
    July 15th, 2012 at 11:46pm
  • skittles36

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    Thank you for the comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to subscribe :'D It honestly makes me really happy every time I get a new reader, especially one that subscribes!
    July 10th, 2012 at 03:17am
  • katie13

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    Hey, thanks for your comment!

    Frerard isn't a person, it's two people. It's one of those couple names that are a mash up of the two names of the people in the relationship, in this case Frank + Gerard = Frerard. Frank is Frank Iero and Gerard is Gerard Way, both from the band My Chemical Romance. I'm glad you still liked it without knowing who it was about, it helps me feel that my writing is strong enough to reach out to a bigger audience.
    July 5th, 2012 at 01:12pm
  • JacksCreativity

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    Haii :D

    Thank you for the story comment on Sing Me To Sleep :3

    I definitely see what you mean about the transitions, it's been a while since a wrote it and I tend not to re-read my stuff once it's all finished with but I now see what you mean and do hope that my writing has improved to make it better for when I do next update.

    Thank youuu :D

    ~Jack's Creativity
    June 27th, 2012 at 10:42pm
  • Foxface

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    I'm glad you liked "Wings"! I'm curious as to your favorite character?
    June 22nd, 2012 at 05:29am
  • Valiente

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    Thank you so much for the comment! The whole reason why she said the pills make her feel numb is because it's pretty much a realization for her. She didn't know what effect the pills had on her grief before. Again, thanks for the comment. It made me smile. -A
    June 22nd, 2012 at 03:55am
  • sleepingonthewaves

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    Thanks for the comment! You're right, I'll try not to make Hazel too cliche. I have a habit of doing that sometime without realizing it. Hahahha
    June 20th, 2012 at 04:04am
  • LookingForSophie

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    That's a really good idea actually! :) I think you always get a feel for it withing the first few chapters, but I think that's kind of bad for the author because I know when I write it takes me a while to get in the swing of things so the first 4 or so chapters are always the worst.

    If you have any suggestions on making Lyric more likeable that would be awesome! :) Or any suggestions at all actually. I always like to know what people are thinking when they are reading it. Or any ideas they have for the story! :) Thank you for offering! :) And you're welcome! :D
    June 20th, 2012 at 02:45am
  • LookingForSophie

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    Hey, thanks for the comment! I'm glad you like her name because it's like my all time favourite name! :D Lyric begins like that on purpose yes, you aren't supposed to love her to start with. Her character is majorly flawed obviously. It's kind of, from my experience, how people react when you mention Justin and after the first three chapters she does begin to warm up to him. It's to show you really shouldn't judge a book by it's cover. Just because you think you know someone doesn't mean you do.

    The thing with Lyric is, she was brought up with money and pretty much getting whatever she wants, and no one who is brought up that way is perfect, mostly because no one is perfect, but I didn't want to use the whole "Rich girl bored with her life" thing because it's a bit over used and I wanted a new spin on Lyric, but trust me as the story goes on she gets more likeable as she matures which is what I wanted.

    Trust me their relationship is far from being rushed, I think there's going to be times when you think they are going to get together and then they don't. I don't like how a lot of stories rush into relationships because it's not real. (Not that having Justin Bieber coming to live with you is really all that realistic!) I want everything to be as realistic as possible.

    Thank you so much for your comment it meant an awful lot to me and thank you for taking the time to read <3
    June 20th, 2012 at 02:36am
  • marshallomnipotence

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    Hey! I really like I'm Not Dead, I'm writing an Eminem fanfiction also. I think yours is brilliant and I love the combination of such strong personalities. =D
    I'm Courtney by the way. =)
    June 9th, 2012 at 11:45am
  • outtahereyall

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    i'm very glad you liked it! if you ever need help, feel free to message or comment me and i'll proof something or whatever for you :-)
    June 7th, 2012 at 04:44pm
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    Thank you for your comment on I Hate Seagulls. I'm glad you've enjoyed reading it so far. I wanted it to be more about their relationship and less about like, everyone in the band. Which I guess elminates a lot of the fanfiction aspect of it.
    June 7th, 2012 at 01:43am
  • olivelovable

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    thanks for the comment in my story!!! it keeps me motivated, and means a lot! I'll try and go back in and revise, and make things a little more clear. a pet peeve of mine in writing is lack of detail, believe it or not!
    the next part should be up soon :-)
    June 6th, 2012 at 10:09pm
  • AmberlyPage1994

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    Pleaseeeee, Update I'm Not Dead!!(:
    April 21st, 2012 at 05:34am
  • Pat M

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    Pleaseeeeee, post more chapters of I'm not dead!
    I'm in love with that storie!!
    March 16th, 2012 at 03:04pm
  • bamckyhimlover

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    Could you please do me a favor? If you have a facebook could you vote for my daughter Natalee in the cutest baby contest? To vote all you have to do is follow the link provided and like her photo! Thanks so much!!!

    http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=79102751#!/photo.php?fbid=288986324448963&set=a.288984031115859.89702.122873484393582&type=1&theater
    September 24th, 2011 at 06:50am
  • TheCoreysGirl

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    The usual. Still working out story ideas. :)
    September 10th, 2011 at 10:37am
  • TheCoreysGirl

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    Hey there! :) What's up with you?
    September 9th, 2011 at 10:35am
  • TheCoreysGirl

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    You're welcome. Glad I can help out a fellow writer. :)
    May 7th, 2011 at 10:04am
  • crutal

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    You've been added as an author to [b]The Real Slim Shady[/b].
    July 25th, 2010 at 04:22am