I'm so sorry to those who are waiting for me to update my story Raindrops on my window! I know I said I would have it done for you last week but my computer got stolen so I the work I did was lost. I then had nothing to type it up on for the whole week and so I was delayed even further. But now I have got a new laptop and will have the whole new chapter up hopefully by the end of the day and the...

Well, I wrote this short story (well It's only one chapter) and I quite like it. The problem is I don't know whether to continue with it or not? So I was just wondering if some people could help me by checking it out and give me feedback about what they like and don't like about it and whether you think I should continue.Here is the description.When you're famliy slowly tears apart, where do you...