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park sungjun (150)

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Thanks so much for that comment! :)

September 1st, 2012 at 07:57am

k45766238 (100)

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Of course! I'm in love with Don't Hesitate, I ought to check out some more of your stories soon. (:

September 1st, 2012 at 06:15am

the4PonyGirls (100)

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Thanks for the comment on "Eponey - the Millenium Bug".
Granted it was a while ago, even whn I initialy started to write the story.
Though I did broaden the scope a bit outside the original?
There should be a few smiles on that part, I'd imagine.

Describing Eponey and her friends early would set the tone for the story. This is after all defining how I narrate the story, even when others are clearly the character in narrative possition.

Oh, the prologue, it's kind of required, and holds off certain details, I did not like to put into the actual story. I'll have to go over this part, just like I'll have to go over everything else, not just once and twice*giggles*

Tell less, I have several chapters where this will make perfect sence. It's the chapters, where the character5s demonstrate what's there, with their presence and action. All stories would require a majority of these chapters. In the case of this story, I have a few chapters, where other perspectives are put into place, I'm sure you would recognice them on the first glance, or the names alone? This is placing the scope in focus, this is a rather large story, I'd have to work on, for quite some time to come.

I have planed for a scene, where she was to introduce as to her home. I may have to go over this part, before I can place it into the story, though. There's the question of when and where it will happen.

The chapters are titled after perspecive and narrative, just as much as after the action. You suggest I point this detail out somewhere?

Chapter 4, I hadn't even started to move the story forwards, before chapter 7, and placed a leap on chapter 10. There's also another move with chapter 11.

I guess I need both the chapter by chapter as well as the entire story focused help.

Chapter 6 is the first male, you may have noticed by the name?

If you like the story, there seems to be 2 chapters you haven't red? After that, there's the more unfinished chapters you can read.

I hope I'm not rushing things by introducing new places this early, in a story as long as this. I may have to make it into several stories, when I get to chapter 100 or so?

Oh well, I'll leave it at this. I hope I've not bothered you.
There will be plenty more to read, if you like the story this far.

July 29th, 2012 at 08:13pm

Adventure Time. (150)

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Hi, thanks for your comment on my oneshot I Forgive you. I really appreciate it! I just fixed the grammar issue- I've been meaning to get around to it for a while, but I keep forgetting (I have a terrible memory) so thanks for reminding me :)

I'm glad you liked it! I'm more comfortable writing fanfiction- it's just easier for me to write and it seems like people don't really read original fics :(. Whenever I try and write an original, I just hit a MAJOR writers block. I don't know why, so I hope that goes away soon! I actually have one original called I'm Not Insane- it's kind of creepy. I don't know if you're into that kind of stuff, but if you are then feel free to check it out along with my other stories :)

June 13th, 2012 at 12:24am

amandaJtommo (100)

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Thank you for your comment, it was absolutely lovely! Did I make British life realistic enough? I am American writing about an American in a British environment. Is there anything rather unrealistic. I want to stay as close to England's culture as I can. I noticed you were from the UK that is why I'm asking!

June 11th, 2012 at 11:08pm