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  • pekigirl

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    heey!! god thank you so much for the comment on No More Breath Inside! It was painful and I cried my eyes out while writing but I wasn't sure if I could make it right, so I'm very glad I did :) sorry for the crying though :x
    and thanks again! those comments mean the world :')
    January 6th, 2014 at 09:20am
  • clint barton.

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    Girl! Let me just say that the comment you left on the final chapter of What We Left Unsaid really did make my night -- not even 'pretty much'. It means so much to me to hear what was going through your mind and how you felt after reading the story and the epilogue, and I honestly don't think I could've wished for much more when I was writing the epilogue.

    I'm glad to hear that the epilogue didn't make it immediately obvious what was going on. I was having a bit of a hard time writing it so that it stayed true to the characters without in your face being 'LOOK THEY'RE AT HER GRAVE!' So hearing that you had different expectations of how the chapter was going -- I'm glad I managed to do what I was aiming for.

    And I'm glad the Zacky ending didn't seem too cliche, but that it actually managed to pull at your heart! Just because it wasn't a fairytale romance didn't mean that common ground was impossible or anything; for a few minutes, they even seemed to be getting there, sharing a bed and doing each other little favors, but I know that's not what you're talking about. It's hard to say how much could've been different, especially had Zacky had the chance to speak to her about it, like you said. Hell, had Ava's first words upon being thrown into the room with him been an explanation of how she didn't know, maybe that could've changed everything.

    I won't stop you from holding on to the idea that she's not dead. I'll stop people from hoping that she'll be resurrected by witches, because that's simply not possible in this story's world and resurrections could open so many doors that need to stay so, so shut. But I won't stop you from hoping she's not dead, because I think crazier things have happened in this story. /shrug. But anyways, you're right, of course, that losing a mate is an extremely traumatic experience for werewolves. Hell, losing someone you've basically been around because of mutual friends for your entire life is traumatic, even if they essentially hated each other. (Brian made a point about Zacky being bored if she wasn't around, I believe?) The sequel will address all of this, I promise, and it'll warp up the loose ends with Drake, the sketchy documents, and everything else. Hopefully it'll be just as good of a read for you!

    I'm glad the title makes more sense now, and I'm so happy to hear that you've really enjoyed the story from start to finish! I really can't explain how much that means to me to hear, or how thankful I am for you taking the time to share your thoughts and hopes concerning the story. Thank you ever so much!

    + And on a mostly un-related note, I thought I might point you in the direction of my blog, because I'm going to be choosing a few people to write a one-shot or so for before I start actively posting on the sequel. If there's anything concerning the characters from the WWLU universe (a what-if scenario, a scene from a different point of view) that you'd like me to write, or even any kind of a one-shot you'd like written completely unrelated from the story, you should let me know, and I might end up choosing to write about it. Or you can ignore this; I just wanted to give you the option. (:
    November 15th, 2013 at 07:22pm
  • clint barton.

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    Hey, Aly! I couldn't really think of a way to respond to your comment at first, but let me just say that I am so very happy that you decided to leave it! Really, it made me smile a lot and pretty much made my night -- I'm not going to lie. Nothing picked me up after having to attack the spider mob in my house during our major cleaning day, but your comment seriously made that all okay.

    I can't express how happy I am to hear that the story's been mindfucking you since the beginning -- and that sounds like a really weird thing to say, but whatever. I'm glad that the twists and the turns caught you by surprise and only kept you more interested in the story, rather than frustrating you and turning you away. It really means the world to me to hear that you've loved the story so much.

    I'm sad that it's coming to an end, too! I'm having the hardest time deciding when to part with the epilogue, just because that would make everything final, but I do promise I'll have it out tonight or tomorrow, so you won't have to be waiting too long for it. And then, of course, there's the sequel, Slip, so it's not like it's really over.

    The epilogue will address your hopes about what really happened when the explosion occurred; so I'm just going to go with 'no comment' on this one. (; And, I mean, I don't think she was counting on Zacky to have actually left her in the room, but I know what you mean, and I'm glad on her behalf that you have such a high opinion of her actions. And, of course, you're right; if she didn't make it, Zack's certainly not going to be able to handle that very easily.

    Thank you again for taking the time to comment! (:
    November 11th, 2013 at 02:26pm
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    Hey, love! I'm just dropping by to say thank you so very much for taking the time to comment on the latest chapter of my story, What We Left Unsaid! I really, really appreciate you letting me know where your head is at during this chapter. (:

    Is there something missing? Yeah, I'd say there definitely is, because at the very least we still don't know why Ava decided to be Zacky's mate. But there could definitely be much more missing than that, as you suspect. You'll just have to wait and find out, though! (;

    I'm glad you're excited for the next update, and I hope that I won't keep you waiting too long. Thanks again!
    October 9th, 2013 at 02:56pm
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    Thanks for recommending "Something I Need"! :)
    April 16th, 2013 at 12:26am
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    Thank you so much for the comment on my story, it means a lot! I'm glad you like it so far!
    April 1st, 2013 at 08:32pm
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    Wow, I can't believe you recommended Call It Off without having read any of it yet! I hope I won't disappoint. You're awesome! Thank you.
    March 26th, 2013 at 05:48am
  • contemplating.you

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    Thank you for recommending my story, Before I Wake:)
    March 20th, 2013 at 12:23pm
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    Thank you for recommending Shell Games! I hope you'll like the story.
    January 7th, 2013 at 06:03am
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    Thank you for commenting on my story! I'm so excited that you've taken the time to respond. It made my night entirely. Looking forward to hearing what you think of the latest postingxx
    September 13th, 2012 at 07:37am
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    Hey! I think you commented on my story that im writing with my friend; You Light Up My World. So i was wondering if you could possibly check out my story Love Without Boundaries? it's featuring Harry Styles. :)

    Thank you! :)
    August 17th, 2012 at 08:38pm
  • wildest dreams

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    Awe, thank you for commenting on it! Awe, a misspelling? I do those all the time, so I pardon my mistake. :) Holly and I both thank you for commenting, glad you like it. :)
    August 7th, 2012 at 06:04am
  • crawfords50girl

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    haha I had to leave you guys hanging :) but don't worry, I'll update soon!
    August 2nd, 2012 at 02:53am
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    Thank you for commenting! <3.
    August 1st, 2012 at 05:07pm
  • wildest dreams

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    Hey! :)
    I just updated " You Light Up my World " If you could please check it out for my co-writer and myself, and please tell us what you think. That'd be amazing, thank you :)
    August 1st, 2012 at 08:01am
  • julietfalls

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    Thanks so much for your comment on "If Only!" I don't think I'd do a sequel, but I'd do another Nicky B story for sure. Hope you're having a good summer!
    July 30th, 2012 at 12:19am
  • crawfords50girl

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    Aw thanks so much! I'm glad my story is one of your favorites! That makes me so excited to hear that!!
    July 24th, 2012 at 08:44pm
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    Thanks for the comment! It really makes my day to think of people reading my story with an idiotic smile of happiness at the crazy ideas from my head.

    This story might be shifting out of the too cute phase some, but not sure that cute and Sea Isle at Carter's house can co-exist:) Well actually I guess they still can, I do have what could be called cute scenes written.
    July 24th, 2012 at 07:32am
  • Gabster16

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    Thank you for the comment on my one-shot! I really appreciated it. I thought about making it a story when I was writing it, but decided not to. But thank you, again! xoxo
    July 23rd, 2012 at 10:54am
  • wildest dreams

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    Thank you for the story comment! I will certainly change what you suggested. :) Thank you for commenting and check it out. It means a lot to the both of us!
    July 23rd, 2012 at 01:55am