Bumblebee Brie / Comments

Aloha :) my new friend =3

Well thanks that means alot to me. I'm glad you liked it that much :)

And I'm sorry if I offended you with my comments on "leap of faith" cause I honestly was kidding.

I do not have a problem with your story Its just that I normally stay clear of story with God in them so I won't get butt hurt, but I really like this story and do not want to stop reading it. My comment was meant to be a piece of friendly advice not an insult. I have reread my comment and can now see where you might think it was an insult but I really did not want to upset you. And I'm sorry that I did insult you cause I do like allot of your story's including "if your mine" and did not mean to hurt your feelings.-Kim

Oh and I really like you story "if your mine" but I just won't to say you might want to be careful with the God thing cause where I don't force my belief in God on others I don't like when people say bad thing about Him and somebody I was reading earlier started to get into real blasphemy and made allot of her readers very upset. Again I am not accusing you of anything and I do not want you to be mad at me, I am just kind of begging you not to say anything bad about God.

She is acting like the Brie (not you I don't think of you as a hoe) I was telling you about. lol But I love this story anyways:)

Yes she is, what other kind of girl gets with a guy and then crawls in bed with his brother??? lol

Yes!
People don't get that.

Thanks for the story comment :)
I'm quite partial to Ava's chapters as well. She does wonders with Tillie.

I'm also going to start a new story tonight, which I'm pretty excited about

Exactly.
They have to make mistakes, because people make mistakes.
They can't be perfect, because they have to grow

I still catch myself doing that from time to time.
But I'm trying to make them more real -- flaws and all

Hahah.
Most people don't get that, and they make their characters perfect.
It's not realistic.

Ahaha.
She just seems real.
If she didn't have her share of issues and doubt, she wouldn't be human

I don't get that impression at all.
She seems like a very caring person, who's simply stuck between two people -- which happens to everyone at some point. She desperately wants to do what will make her happy, but she doesn't want anyone hurt because of it.
And the weak thing? She ventured out on her own, and is taking care of herself and two pets in the middle of unfamiliar territory. That makes her strong :)

Hahah.
You're welcome :)
I'm really glad you decided to continue it.
Your characters are amazing, and the story is fantastic :)

Of course :)
That story was one I the best I've ever read

You're welcome :)
You're an amazing writer

cool, what is it?

Eh I have been okay hbu

I'm alright you?

I shall! thanks!