Sorry you feel that way about the strikethrough.
I thought it added something.
I'll try to use them more sparingly in the chapters to come,
but there will be a few instances where that will be unavoidable.
But they'll probably only be used at all up through chapter 10 or 11.
I hope that helps!
Thanks for your input!
I love constructive criticism! I'm actually in the middle of editing my Bet story, so do you think you could be more specific about certain parts where you felt the parents were too convenient? Thanks!
Do you mean the person who yells it during the [i]end[/i] credits or the beginning ones? lol. And I'd love to hear some of your theories. Or you can just save it for the end and yell I TOTALLY CALLED IT ^_^ Which ever works
I'm so glad you like the story and I hope you like the prequel just as much. When you finish, be sure to tell me your favorite part and character :)
Oh wow, then you're epic and I want to like squish hug you to death. XDDDDDD I know. I'm strange, but really, it's nice to have a reader who likes to check out my other stuff too. Not many people actually go that far and do that much while reading a story.
Thanks! I'm stoked you like this one too. **sees another one of my comments here** I'm starting to notice that there's a good few readers who bounce around on all of my stories for the most part, so thanks for that too. :D