I need input on my writing style...

My friends say I'm a good writer, one actually called me brilliant, but I think I could be much better. Please read my latest story, Believe, and tell me what you think. My other story is pretty old and I've developed my talent more since then. Feel free to say what you like about the story and/or my writing style, but please don't be nasty.Thanks a ton,plgdlfl
August 28th, 2007 at 05:03am