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  • losing control.

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    Thank you for your comment on Détruire! Arms
    November 17th, 2017 at 07:07am
  • kitsch

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    I have more time to be around and lurk now that I finished the spring semester of uni. Shifty So I should get into doing that too, reconnecting and whatnot.
    May 25th, 2017 at 08:24am
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    @ kitsch
    Omg Bye you're welcome! I usually like to send out requests every once in a while to explore different people's stories & blogs! Keeps Mibba fun!
    April 17th, 2017 at 09:32pm
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    Thank you for the friend request. c: Wish I was online more like when I first joined the site, you're also an OG Mibbian and I'm like Crazy Clap Smiley !!!
    April 14th, 2017 at 06:46pm
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    Thank you for the story comment. Arms
    April 14th, 2017 at 01:00pm
  • coralreefs;

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    @ kaz brekker
    Omg you're welcome!!! That story gave me chills. It's beautiful and sad and so amazingly written.
    April 5th, 2016 at 08:43am
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    I saw your interview with Sam and saw that you included Belle Morte in your favorite stories and all I could think was oh my god. It's been a really long time since I've seen someone mention that story; I honestly thought people forgot that I wrote it since I took it down awhile ago because I'm more known for Bambi now. lmfao But anyway, thank you so much! I've actually been working on and off with that story over the past year.
    April 5th, 2016 at 04:21am
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    It's interesting seeing what everyone does with their sign of choice. But I feel like I'm being selfish, because they lured me in with the implanting of astrology (one of my passions) Shifty tehe
    February 23rd, 2016 at 02:37pm
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    @ clint barton.
    Aww you're too sweet! I'm glad you enjoyed my comments haha Sp Ike Writer's block is the worst honestly, I get it! Take your time :)
    February 23rd, 2016 at 01:23am
  • clint barton.

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    Hey love! I just wanted to drop in and say thank you ever so much for taking the time to leave all of your wonderful, detailed comments on my story Dru! It really means the world to me to know what you think, and I found all of your insights extremely motivating! Forgive me for not getting back to you sooner! I’m apparently a terrible person when it comes to responding to comments, but I swear I really do appreciate each and every word you wrote!

    I’m thrilled to hear you find the story interesting and unique (and of course, happy to hear you enjoy the writing itself, too)!

    Yeah, Cannizzaro’s a character, isn’t he? I might’ve put some of my own frustration toward xenophobia into this story a bit more than was necessary… but oh well. I’m glad you’re not a fan of it, either! xD Although, just to be fair to him, Cannizzaro’s not the only one in the story who has said something cringeworthy…

    Hahaha, glad you enjoyed the Little Red reference! I think I was feeling particularly sassy when I channelled Katie that day. I need to do that again.

    Oh yeah, definitely speaks English perfectly well. It’d be too hard for me to write a story with people who didn’t speak the same language at all. No Pocahontas-styled magically-able-to-understand-you-after-three-words crap, here. xD

    Please don’t ever apologize for commenting! I absolutely adore hearing what you’re thinking, and I’m so glad you’re loving the story.

    Also glad you find the ‘Kitten’ thing cute. xD I’m personally a fan of how he uses it both affectionately and derogatorily. He’s a man of many talents, that Nikolai. xDD (;

    Suuuuuuper sorry that I didn’t update soon! I absolutely adored your comments and they were extremely motivating, but I was really struggling with this last chapter. Major writer’s block. I’ve officially learned the lesson that I can’t just make the chapter go where I want it to go; I actually have to sit down and let the characters run free. Hopefully that means I won’t keep you waiting as long in the future.

    Ohhhhh, he’s up to something, alright. No guesses? I tried to make it obvious without being obvious. I’ll do my best to get the next installment out as soon as possible!

    Once again, thank you ever so much for the comments, love; I cannot explain to you exactly how much I appreciate them!
    February 22nd, 2016 at 11:19pm
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    thank you so much for the comment Arms!!
    February 21st, 2016 at 02:53am
  • hangsang.

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    No problem!Cute I subscribed and I really can't wait to see where you go with it. Your take was honestly one of my favoritestehe
    February 2nd, 2016 at 02:30am
  • coralreefs;

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    @ dawn of light
    I totally agree! I think the contest is a great idea to encourage people to give more feedback. Thanks again so much, that's so sweet :')
    February 1st, 2016 at 02:27am
  • dawn of light

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    THAT MAKES ME SO HAPPY TO HEAR!!!! tehe

    And I actually feel that way about my entry as well (the whole people forcing to read and comment BC of the contest itself). However, the contest concept itself is pretty good/smart so people are encouraged to comment more Cute

    But your's is too good to be left as a two-shot so here I am begging for more Weird
    February 1st, 2016 at 02:20am
  • coralreefs;

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    @ dawn of light
    Oh wow...you have no idea how much it means to me that you asked that. I was thinking ppl would only force themselves to read it bc of the contest and how we all have to leave a comment on each entry lol. I worked really hard on those two chapters, so thank you so much for your enthusiasm and the comment you left on it! I've got lots of different ideas for the story so I'm thinking I might continue it if at least a few people want me to! I'd love to make it into a full story! You're the second person who has asked so I'm DEFINITELY considering it Kicking
    February 1st, 2016 at 02:16am
  • dawn of light

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    I have to ask, are you planning on making The Victrix a full story? I really do like what you started In Love
    February 1st, 2016 at 02:09am
  • coralreefs;

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    @ dawn of light
    Aww you're so sweet thank you! OMG YES I'M EXCITED NOW Cool
    February 1st, 2016 at 02:07am
  • dawn of light

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    @ coralreefs;
    NO I KINDA LOVE THAT YOU POINTED THOSE ERRORS OUT! I'll go ahead and change them! I'll credit you in the summary btw (:

    I tried to ask some of those editing hubs to look over my work but it's still in process. The more editing, the better, right?

    THANK YOU!!

    And I have two more chapters to post before it officially ends Cute
    February 1st, 2016 at 02:04am
  • coralreefs;

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    @ dawn of light
    In chapter 1 you wrote: The perk blinks and sustains a calm face. “That’s mean scar you got there, detective.” The man trails his eyes on Stanton’s forearm. “You got that on the job, detective?”

    I'm assuming you meant the word perp, and meant to put the letter a between the words "That's mean..."

    In chapter 2 you wrote: The streets were dead and lacking breathes of life.

    I think the proper word for that sentence would be breaths.

    In chapter 3 you wrote: Every time I woke up back from the dead, a quick thought of who’s been helping me would run across my brain.

    This might just be me, but I personally feel like the sentence would flow a lot more smoothly if it was: Every time I woke back up from the dead...

    AGAIN, I'd like to point out that these are suuuuper duper minor/unimportant errors that DO NOT AT ALL take away from the plot!!! Whether or not you fix them will not effect the reader's opinion of the story, it's honestly a great three-shot. I just thought I'd let you know since I definitely appreciate it when readers tell me when I've made even minor/trivial mistake(s). Your writing is so awesome btw, I love your style!

    Also, you're welcome for the comment on AG8210V! That story is dope! Mr. Green
    February 1st, 2016 at 02:00am
  • dawn of light

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    WAIT HAHA. YOU COMMENTED ON AG8210V TOO. You made my day today In Love thank you!
    January 31st, 2016 at 06:57pm