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Yeah I get what you mean. I did used to have "Think outside the box..." as the summary (then a divider and the contest info) but thought that might give away too much.

Okay that's a fair enough thing to say. :)

Hi, so thanks for the comment on my story :)

I was wondering, what would you put as the summary? I see what you mean, but I don't know what to say without ruining the story or it being inappropriate in some way.

I did plan the whole thing from start to end, the general scenes I was going to cover that would represent different genres of writing, and then the ending that would explain it. I got the idea for the ending before I got ideas for the rest of the story, as hinted at in the summary. I'm disappointed it seemed jumpy because I was bored or something. Would there have been a better ending in your opinion?

thanks a bunch :)

i re did alot of my story trying to fix what you said. check it out please? i really need help

Haha, awh.

Did you get any writing done or anything like that while online?

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Lawl, i've been on the forums too much today.

Awh c:
You guys sound so cute~!

c: I'm gonna see if I friend wants to read it and keep editing it, then i'm gonna post.
I got this C:

Yeah. :l

Oh gosh that sucks.
At least you'll still get to see him, do you guys talk a lot?

Awh lawl.
Sure [;
I know this chapter is going to be terrible, it reads terrible to me right now, but i've got to keep going and then double back and edit it.. Like twice.

Everyone thinks i'm not responsible.
I hate people who think they know me so well when all they know are the traits I did not have, years ago.

Hah~ I love how that was just in the middle of everything.
Nothing happened with your boyfriend last night?
[; sounds like you're living the life. c:

Um, i'm just working on the second chapter in my story,
It's going to be much shorter than the first sadly, but i'm getting the point across, so it's fine I suppose. I've just got to end it, and i'm finished really.

c: I wanna, but I don't think I can..

[; Hah, i'll try. xD
So how are you?

c: I want a whippet puppy..
I love them. So much.
<3

LOL. Yeah, spicing things up. c;

[: Alrightyo.

Awh. That sounds cute. c:
I want a puppy.

And ah noo.
We're so bland and boring, maybe tomorrow something exciting will happen though.
Hah~ Who knows?

Heh.
It's called Safeguard, if you wanted to just peek at it.
Safeguard

Ew, dog.. Spew..
Well, it's good you've got a cute pick-me-up. c:

Hah~
What's the crack?
That sounds awesome,
Also sounds like drugs.

I'm a little scatterbrained, i'm supposed to be working on a story,
But i'm a little ditzy. I don't want to, but I really do, and now I know,
I'm not really making sense, it's like, love hate, but it's do don't.
Kind of..

And you? c:

Because i'm too awkward to just say "hey"
it would be too.. strange for me.

You there~!
Stop posting after me.
[;

Actually, I don't mind,
This was just a scheme to send you a comment.

thank you for your wonderful comment! it was really nice, aw. and i'm glad that the theme of the story comes across, it's very character based (most of my stories are), but i just wanted to change up the plot a little bit, so the plot is quite slow. i'm really glad it read through. thanks again. <3

Since you commented on Nineteen Minutes I just thought I'd let you know that it's now completed! Hope you enjoyed it, your thoughts would be greatly appreciated.

I'm baaaaack!
Check out my new story? :)
http://stories.mibba.com/read/437472/Hold-Me-Close/

You are very welcome! (: