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  • Queen of the Clouds

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    Yeah I get what you mean. I did used to have "Think outside the box..." as the summary (then a divider and the contest info) but thought that might give away too much.

    Okay that's a fair enough thing to say. :)
    June 12th, 2012 at 12:45am
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    Hi, so thanks for the comment on my story :)

    I was wondering, what would you put as the summary? I see what you mean, but I don't know what to say without ruining the story or it being inappropriate in some way.

    I did plan the whole thing from start to end, the general scenes I was going to cover that would represent different genres of writing, and then the ending that would explain it. I got the idea for the ending before I got ideas for the rest of the story, as hinted at in the summary. I'm disappointed it seemed jumpy because I was bored or something. Would there have been a better ending in your opinion?
    June 11th, 2012 at 11:38pm
  • KattieCupcakes

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    thanks a bunch :)
    June 11th, 2012 at 08:56pm
  • KattieCupcakes

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    i re did alot of my story trying to fix what you said. check it out please? i really need help
    June 11th, 2012 at 08:49pm
  • Deer

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    Haha, awh.

    Did you get any writing done or anything like that while online?
    June 11th, 2012 at 07:42pm
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    [;

    Lawl, i've been on the forums too much today.
    June 11th, 2012 at 07:27pm
  • Deer

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    Awh c:
    You guys sound so cute~!

    c: I'm gonna see if I friend wants to read it and keep editing it, then i'm gonna post.
    I got this C:
    June 11th, 2012 at 07:17pm
  • Deer

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    Yeah. :l

    Oh gosh that sucks.
    At least you'll still get to see him, do you guys talk a lot?

    Awh lawl.
    Sure [;
    I know this chapter is going to be terrible, it reads terrible to me right now, but i've got to keep going and then double back and edit it.. Like twice.
    June 11th, 2012 at 05:11pm
  • Deer

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    Everyone thinks i'm not responsible.
    I hate people who think they know me so well when all they know are the traits I did not have, years ago.

    Hah~ I love how that was just in the middle of everything.
    Nothing happened with your boyfriend last night?
    [; sounds like you're living the life. c:

    Um, i'm just working on the second chapter in my story,
    It's going to be much shorter than the first sadly, but i'm getting the point across, so it's fine I suppose. I've just got to end it, and i'm finished really.
    June 11th, 2012 at 04:48pm
  • Deer

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    c: I wanna, but I don't think I can..

    [; Hah, i'll try. xD
    So how are you?
    June 11th, 2012 at 04:19pm
  • Deer

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    c: I want a whippet puppy..
    I love them. So much.
    <3

    LOL. Yeah, spicing things up. c;
    June 11th, 2012 at 02:04am
  • Deer

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    [: Alrightyo.

    Awh. That sounds cute. c:
    I want a puppy.

    And ah noo.
    We're so bland and boring, maybe tomorrow something exciting will happen though.
    Hah~ Who knows?
    June 11th, 2012 at 12:34am
  • Deer

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    Heh.
    It's called Safeguard, if you wanted to just peek at it.
    Safeguard

    Ew, dog.. Spew..
    Well, it's good you've got a cute pick-me-up. c:
    June 11th, 2012 at 12:24am
  • Deer

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    Hah~
    What's the crack?
    That sounds awesome,
    Also sounds like drugs.

    I'm a little scatterbrained, i'm supposed to be working on a story,
    But i'm a little ditzy. I don't want to, but I really do, and now I know,
    I'm not really making sense, it's like, love hate, but it's do don't.
    Kind of..

    And you? c:
    June 11th, 2012 at 12:17am
  • Deer

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    Because i'm too awkward to just say "hey"
    it would be too.. strange for me.
    June 11th, 2012 at 12:10am
  • Deer

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    You there~!
    Stop posting after me.
    [;

    Actually, I don't mind,
    This was just a scheme to send you a comment.
    June 11th, 2012 at 12:04am
  • daisyfairy

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    thank you for your wonderful comment! it was really nice, aw. and i'm glad that the theme of the story comes across, it's very character based (most of my stories are), but i just wanted to change up the plot a little bit, so the plot is quite slow. i'm really glad it read through. thanks again. <3
    June 10th, 2012 at 04:13pm
  • silk tea.

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    Since you commented on Nineteen Minutes I just thought I'd let you know that it's now completed! Hope you enjoyed it, your thoughts would be greatly appreciated.
    February 17th, 2012 at 07:20am
  • rodeoclowns

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    I'm baaaaack!
    Check out my new story? :)
    http://stories.mibba.com/read/437472/Hold-Me-Close/
    December 13th, 2011 at 02:02am
  • tealores

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    You are very welcome! (:
    April 7th, 2011 at 08:29am