Wonderous. (Criticism)

Wonderous is a story where nine teenagers that have different jobs, similar but contrary personalities, and live in the same house. A big mansion, may I add. I'm writing this story with Nunu and Luna, about that, and so far even though I have no problems with it, it seems people don't like it very much. The reason Luna decided to stop posting until, it gets better I guess. I am trying, but so far...
May 31st, 2010 at 04:07am