Thank you so much for the thorough, detailed comment you left on my story! I really appreciate it! It had so much good information and I really see what you meant about it reading like a list! I'm definitely going to use your review to help improve my story! Thanks so much!!
Wow, thanks for the comment on my story, "Raised By Wolves". Really? I didn't know that werewolves were so big right now. lol. I'm happy that you were interested in my story when you don't even know the band. I recommend you check them out. They are incredible. :)
Thank you for the lovely comment that you left on 'Unit 731'. And I totally agree, most stories, even ones written by published authors, deal with the nuclear bombings and stuff. I decided I'd do it differently ^^
Thanks for the comment on my story, "Girl with the Fire Eyes"! I'm glad you enjoyed it. (Also, you're welcome for the feedback I gave you on your story -- "Fairest".)
Thank you for you comment on Intertwined. I appreciate it. And thank you for pointing out my problems with paragraphs. I'll try fixing them as soon as I have some time to do so. Also, the story isn't about an unexpected ressurection of Cora's dead mother. It's much more than that, and it has a lot to do with water, the sea, and so on. Hence the picture. Sorry if that wasn't clear.
Thanks for the comment, but I wanted to say that the time is completely different then. The standards of slavery are much different, though the part with his mother does need to be edited. As for the paragraphs, I think they are just fine and I am not going to change then.
(Sorry if this comes off as rude, lol, but again, thanks for the feedback.)
Thanks so much for your comment on my story Maybe Someday. It really means a lot! I understand what you mean with possibly using past tense with the flashback chapters, but I thought to really get her POV of how she felt then, it might be a little jaded by her bitterness and anger with Dan from the present. That's the only reason I continued with the present tense, but thank you so much for your constructive criticism!
Hi! You're so sweet! Thanks for the comment on 'It's The Truth!' And I love the fact that you compared this to my tumblr because I love that well and take that as a huge compliment (My url is thatisthemagic -- feel free to stop by!)
As for it being listed as an original fiction, thanks for the memo! I started this story like almost three years ago, forgot about it, and just started updating a few months ago. So I didn't pay much attention as to what it was listed. But I will now change it.
So yes, thank you. I appreciate your comment. And have a lovely day! :))
I've had quite a few people confused with those parts, well not the Isaac part but the other one, first I am so sorry for not describing this! I'll probably edit it later but Arianna's dad sells artillery to the Argents and other nearby offers so all he does is drive to their houses to drop it off and come back home. It doesn't take him a long time unless he is putting the weapons together or something of that sort. About the Isaac part I might need you to explain your confusion about that part again, sorry. Thank you sooo sooooo much for commenting , it means a great deal to me! Thank you for your criticism also so that I know what to work on!
Thank you for the comment on Hate You Forever! I’m glad a Pens fan is reading this and not jumping on me saying “OMG CROSBY IS DA BEST!” – you know how they can be. It’s a challenge for me to write, only because I am not a Pens fan, but I hope I can do your team well. If there are any errors in what I post please don’t hesitate to correct me!
I’ve taken your criticism to note and will try my best to make sure it flows a little smoother in the coming chapters. I understand how Jessica changed her mind so quickly, but don’t worry- she’s not going down that easy. =)
With the NHL in a battle now, and the possibility of no season, I’ll need something to do to pass the time! I also want to make a quick note to you- the fact you have The Cab in your signature….LOVE IT! <3 A million e-hugs to you.