Hey thank you so much for the comment and advice for my one-shot. I don't really like the title as well. but i couldn't think of anything and i went a long with the current title. But if you've got any other suggest please tell me :D . Thank you so much! I've got a problem with the whole paragraphing thing I'm trying to sort it out :D I', looking for some to help me sort the whole paragraphing thing out :D
Hi Lamia, I've got a favour to ask. Can you please check out my one-shot on my profile and leave some constructive critism??!!Pretty please with cherries on top??!!