I am done with uni for the weekend, i need something to keep me entertained this weekend. I'll read anything but I will not read about rape.I have written a story called 'I'll Tell Him You're a Hero' I was wondering if you guys could check the grammar and stuff for me please :) if you do I'll read your story and comment.By the way, All The Small Things can on the radio. Awesome song. Raving to it...

I had a a few comments about grammar on this story, all the errors have been fixed. The layout has been updated as well :)I would like more feedback on it to see if I can improve it in anyway, so I am going a comment swap on it with any stories you want. I'll read most things unless it's rape or incest related. I don't mind if it's fan-fic or original fiction. I really need help on grammar, so...

I have tried (and have probably failed) to write a proper story and I would really like some feedback on it. Its called "I'll tell him you're a hero".I don't have any rules, I will read any story and comment back on the chosen story. I will read all of the story, unless it's 20 or more chapters.I need another 52 words so I am gonna fill it up this is pointless sentence.Hope you all having a good...

I'm sat on my bed with nothing to do, I need a good story to read. It doesnt matter if it's fanfic or original, but please no Justin Bieber, A part from that anything goes :)I'll just bore you now. You can skip this part if you want too :)Dad, everytime you see me, you don't have to ask me if I have a boyfriend. I never do. Yeah I am 18 but that doesnt mean I need a boyfriend to make me...

I'm finished cleaning and I have nothing to do, rather than going out I want a good story to read.I'll comment and I don't expect the favour to be returned. I'm a bad writer.I'll read anything apart from incest. I love both fan-fic and Orignal fiction.But if it's fanfic then nothing relating to Justin bieberSo please whore me your stories,I need another 36 words so I'm gonna ask you some...

I'm offically proud to be british (note the use of scarsam)Well the London riots have gotten worse and students are being blamed for it, Please this isn't about social or other issuses, its to do feckless thugs with a taste of violence. Nothing is being done, the police havent got the right equipment and the government will not send the army to help solve the riots. These people need to grow up....

She was an amazing singer but she was deeply troubled, addicted to drugs and alcohol.She was only 27, she lead such a short life. She had help but it never worked. She will always be remembered. Music has lost a legend.RIP, the heavens better be ready for you...

I am Confused as to why the younger generation of girls all want to be plastic barbies, with the blonde hair and skinny. A large portion of girls when asked what they want to be when they grow, most answered with "Popstar" and "Supermodels". When I was their age I wanted to be a lawyer.  But my faith in the younger generation was restored by my 7 year old niece.  Her role model is JK Rowling,...

After the recent rise in gay teen suicides, a man who himself is gay this project to help teenagers who are gay. Even though I am not gay or bi, I think it's an amazing thing.I think it's horrible this project was needed in the first place, people should be accepted no matter of sexuality.It doesn't make a difference if you like men, women or both. Everybody is equal and they should be treated...

Oh the joy of a british summer. I'm currently travelling to Warrington to go to a BBQ. It's pouring down with rain.Oh Britain I love you but I wished it was sunnier. Oh well at least I'm going to have a laugh :)Anyway rant overI have become a sort a problem slover :)I'm just gonna fill the rest up with lyricsI wish you could see your face right now,'Cause you're grinning like a fool.And we're...

I am proud to be britishI am fed up of people saying they dont like being British. i am proud to be british and here is a list why1-Britain has a ‘Great’ in front of it’s name2-Monty Python3-You can’t get a decent cup of tea in America4-Britons have a greater grasp of sarcasm, irony and self-deprecating humour5-The Full English Breakfast, ‘nuff said6-The traditional British pub7-The...

I am not a man hating feminist, who believe that men are the root of all evil. Each person is entitled to their own opinions on the matter. So if you are a man hating feminist good for you :).I am typical cliched teenage girl, who is in love with her best friend. Yes he's funny and adorable. All my friends say we belong. We don't, Best friends is all we are meant to be and his girlfriend is an...

So I know not many people will read this but I need a place to rant.So here goes.People who judge based on sexuality, race and religion. Stupid people who are afraid of the unknown.Why people need to lie? Especially when I alreadly know the truth. I know you don't like me I'd rather be told to my face.Anyway rant over.Now on to musicI just downloaded the new lady gaga album and it ain't half bad,...

Layout.Please help me I need a new layout for my profile. My attempts failed.I will love you forever. It can be anything, Hopefully all time low or Draco Malfory related.Exams stressAll I am saying that I hate them.Uni applicationsI am not happy with Ucas at all. Hogwarts wasn't an option. I have had to settle for Chester instead.I need to fill this up so here goes. (Just a bit of fan-girling)All...

Why is it when life seems to be going ok that something bad happens. First my life is was going great, the lad I like is talking to me and I got tickets for all time low. But yesterday I came home from college and my mum was crying. Now I hate seeing my mum crying, it kills me. My mum told me that my cousins brain tumour has come back. They can't operate again but they are gonna do chemotherapy...

I seriously want a tattoo, when I turn 18 next year.I have narrowed it down to 3 different ones :/I need help ??this one dont really have a meaning[img]http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2159/2183880830_6ecf9167b9.jpg?v=0[/img]this one reminds me of my grandparents, my grandad past away and my grandma is still here.Or I want "Live Life With No Regrets " on my...

Ok. So I may just seem like another love sick teenager. Who has discovered that love isn't like it is in the films. But I think I am in love but I am not sure. Let's just say I have a big crush on this boy. I can't blame anyone but myself. I hate feeling vulnerable, like this person holds my heart and that they could break it in a second. So I am going to grow up because he doesn't feel the...

I need a new profile layout :)I am rubbish at making them.Anyone want to help me out ???? :)I would love a All time low layout :Dplease help me..? London 3.11.10? Russell Howard 16.02.11? ALL TIME LOW 06.03.11? New York 28.03.11so my life is amazing at the momentAnyway questions:1) How is life for you ??2) Whore me your stories ??3) Song of the day ??4) Any good words of wisdom ??Thanks for...

Well as you can tell from the title, you can tell my life is pretty great at the moment.1) Going to New York next march2) All Time Low are touring in england next march and i am going to see them3) Going to see wicked in the west end :D :D4) Vampire Diaries is back on and I am loving the new series :)My friend recently told I am good with problems, so if you need any helpI am here :D lolAnyway...

So my stories have received some bad reviews..I am grateful for the advice.I am gonna take most of them down and look over them and edit them.So thanks for the the advice and I am truly grateful :DI miss my dad.....He lives in the Isle of Mann, you can only there by plane or boat :(.I only see him three times a year.What’s the difference between Wayne Rooney and Shrek?Shrek can save the...