[b]Time Stands Still: Book One[/b] is officially completed. This is a thanks to all the awesome readers who took part in the story that I love. Thanks you guys.
It is! I went to sleep last night and it felt like 18 hours of sleep because I woke up and had no idea what time it was. It's one of the few places I can spend weeks and not know the day of the week and not care. That's how I always define a true vacation
Very very relaxing. It's only my second day here. I'm staying like six weeks, sort of trying not to think about all my friends back home. I didn't actually want to leave so since it was my last summer with them before college, but it ended up just happening.
I'm just making the best of it. One thing I love about life here is that time does not matter!
At home I would have woken up and looked at the time and ate and showered and did everything based on time. But, here I woke up and slept, then slept, and got on the computer. Time moves so SLOW here!
But, it's only cause I'm in Kingston and not Montego Bay I guess, or time is slower here.
No problem! It always helps to be a few steps ahead of what you've written mentally. Hell, I even write chapters ahead of what I upload to Mibba most of the times.
I enjoyed the chapter very much.
And done better?
Maybe follow up with that "lost romance" that Scarlet stole, possibly use that for conflict, like maybe have the guy like the main character.
In that particular chapter,
I honestly can't think of much, but maybe be sure to explain why Scarlet is the way she is?