Well you could add detail to your next one
June 13th, 2010 at 03:08am
CrossJHero / Comments
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yeah, I can't wait until I finally get done with the chapter I'm almost done...June 9th, 2010 at 12:47am
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That's cool, and no she's not going to be human she's going t be an angel of destruction and the story's going to start hen she was little, to now, and then... I don't know yetJune 7th, 2010 at 04:34am
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your welcome and I'm going to start when she was human and a 'prep'June 4th, 2010 at 01:00am
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I read your story, and I liked it. I seen that you jumped around alot. You should try to keep the sentence simple and try to explain his feelings more, otherwise I loved it... good job.June 3rd, 2010 at 12:15am
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true, I guess I could fit that in.May 30th, 2010 at 06:59am
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Good idea but didn't she throw her phone?May 20th, 2010 at 02:04am
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It's hard to say, I want this chapter to be better than the last... it's kinda hard to think of what happens after she wakes up, have any thoughts?May 19th, 2010 at 12:24am
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Awsome, I can't waitMay 15th, 2010 at 06:33am
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No that's great, I like it... it's really mysterious, hm cool.May 14th, 2010 at 12:46am
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Cool, I'll be waitingMay 10th, 2010 at 09:16pm
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Cool, I can't wait eitherMay 7th, 2010 at 11:30pm
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that really sucks, Hope you pass though good luckApril 29th, 2010 at 05:35am
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Cool, so how's testing?April 24th, 2010 at 03:53am
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okay well unitl then friendApril 23rd, 2010 at 02:17am
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Cool, I'm still looking forward to reading your storyApril 19th, 2010 at 12:50am
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yeah, but I'm in kind of stressed and I don't want it to effect my workApril 18th, 2010 at 04:10am
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I do, once you start writting I'll start reading... = )April 16th, 2010 at 12:20am
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sounds good to me, what kinds of things tho... there are a lot of things he could have done.April 14th, 2010 at 11:53pm
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Thanks, that's good, and it gave me some ideas... I owe you oneApril 12th, 2010 at 04:40am