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  • asylum's riot.

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    I've heard a lot of people have been having that problem with comment swap. Sorry and good luck with it though. I'm glad you liked reading it a second time though. :) I know exactly what you're talking about when you say that the troubled self-esteem doesn't completely match. I put in a line somewhere about how she didn't think she was worth saving, but I really could't think of much else. :/ Thank you for the criticism. Very Happy
    July 6th, 2012 at 06:58pm
  • asylum's riot.

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    Thank you for the comment. I fixed the mistakes you pointed out. (:
    July 5th, 2012 at 10:47pm
  • CharmedMiss

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    Thank you so much for the very detailed story comment! It is so easy to read over those tiny errors, and I really appreciate your help in proofreading! I will try to update soon! (:
    July 4th, 2012 at 05:01pm
  • TabbyKitty13

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    Thanks for noticing that mistake for me. (: I went back and fixed it. I do proofread, but sometimes stuff just slips me, so I really appreciate the help!
    June 30th, 2012 at 07:20pm
  • Smoothies

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    Thank you for the comment! It helped a lot and I'm very glad you enjoyed the story. Cute
    June 30th, 2012 at 05:55pm
  • lucymadeley

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    Thank you for the comment, I haven't really edited it much yet so your suggestions are really helpful thanks :-)
    June 26th, 2012 at 03:39pm
  • Unspoken_Lies

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    Thanks for the comment ( The F Word)!
    You should definitely read the prequel to catch up, and I apologize in advance for the mistakes and the shortness of the chapters. I'll try to fix that soon.
    Anyway thanks and I'll keep doing what I do and hope you like it xD
    June 26th, 2012 at 03:49am
  • Zorua

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    Thank you so much for the comment! :) I can't believe I didn't catch that typo. xD I wrote the story a long time ago and I really can't catch things sometimes, so thanks for pointing things out.
    June 24th, 2012 at 11:34pm
  • n. josten

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    Thank you so much for the comment on my story. (:
    It was really, really helpful. I went back and read over the things you pointed out, and I realized that some things would flow better if I changed it the way you said. Also, the stupid mistakes like the 'light' instead of 'lightly' thing and missing a word, I'm really, really sorry for. I edit my own writing, which tends to make me do things like that. I wish I had an editor, I swear. But thank you, once again. It was very helpful.
    June 24th, 2012 at 03:13pm
  • hello love.

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    thank you for your comment :) and i know, HOW HARD is the new layout maker?! it's impossible...i've only just worked out how to change my profile layout! x
    June 24th, 2012 at 11:57am
  • die Bienen Knie

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    thanks so much for the story comment!
    June 23rd, 2012 at 11:22pm
  • saudade.

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    Thanks so much for the comment you left on What Means the Most! It really meant a lot. I'll go and edit the layout now, thanks for letting me know what you thought!
    June 23rd, 2012 at 02:39pm
  • Haylie Jaed

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    Absolutely no problem, love. =) I only wish there was more I could have said. Your story reminded me of exactly why I join writing sites - the delight of finding little, unpublished gems.
    June 23rd, 2012 at 01:19pm
  • Cuts.Run.Deep...

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    That makes complete sense thankyou Smile
    June 14th, 2012 at 03:24am
  • CharmedMiss

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    Thank you so much for the great suggestions on my story! I always had a problem with my title, thinking it was a little too wordy, but I could never think of a way to make it better! So thank you very much! (:
    June 10th, 2012 at 04:38pm
  • Grandiose Delusions

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    You're quite welcome :)
    March 30th, 2012 at 08:17am
  • EveryRose

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    So may i say that i love your poems, and that i wish i was as good at writing as you are.
    March 29th, 2012 at 11:18pm
  • OurLullaby

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    Twins or stalker? lol
    March 9th, 2012 at 08:58pm
  • OurLullaby

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    But in a scary way 0.o
    March 7th, 2012 at 03:32pm
  • Forever.Falling.Down

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    Your welcome(:
    I just couldn't stop reading it. Haha. Your really good!! :D
    February 19th, 2012 at 03:15am