Hi! I just posted a story called Smile When Your Heart Breaks, a Paul/Twilight fanfic and I honestly think it's worth checking out, so please take a look at it! Or if you're not a twilight fan, I also have stories posted for Avenged Sevenfold, Vampire Diaries, Harry Potter, Original stories, and other Twilight. :] Thank you for your time and happy reading! Smile When Your Heart Breaks: http://stories.mibba.com/read/370995/Smile-When-Your-Heart-Breaks/
Heya, thanks for the story comment. I understand if you don't want to read the story from where it's going now but I just wanted to say thanks so much for reading it up to this point and for all the comments you posted :)
Thanks so much for the story comment. ^_^ I really appreciate it, and I think you're pretty much hit the nail on the head. He does feel that he needs to take care of her, and in the next chapter people should be able to see exactly why.
In Brian's defence, he never saw her father. For all he knows, she could be lying about it, she could have set everything up, etc. It's a long shot, but he can never be too careful. He's just trying to look out for his buddy - even if it does mean being an ass to an innocent girl.
Again, thanks so much! I'll try to get the next chapter up soon. =)
That's actually the way I'm going right now, so you're not sounding harsh at all. In the next... chapter or two I'd say things will even out, and you'll see how.
Thanks for being honest. Oddly enough, I agree about not feeling the chapter - and it's my work -_-. There's something about taking that long of a break that messes me up. Either way, it'll hopefully be back to normal soon. Thanks for the vote of confidence.
AND HERE"S HERS. POSTED IN NOVEMBER 2009. SHE"S PUT IT INTO FUCKING CONTESTS AND ALL THIS OTHER BULLSHIT
AND IM FUCKING PISSED BEYOND ALL GODDAMN BELIEF.
http://stories.mibba.com/read/214107/Circles/1/
I REMEMBER EVERY GODDAMN THING I EVER WROTE. EVEN AFTER THREE YEARS. I READ LIKE TWO PARAGRAPHS OF HERS AND KNEW AUTOMATICALLY THAT ID READ IT BEFORE. AND THAT IT WAS MINE.
SOMEONE STOLE MY SHIT
I NEVER THOUGHT THIS WOULD EVER FUCKING HAPPEN. BUT ITS BEEN STOLEN WORD FOR FUCKING WORD, WITH SLIGHT POV CHANGES.
I AM SHAKING SO FUCKING MUCH RIGHT NOW. BECAUSE IT WAS SOMETHING I FUCKING DID AS AN ASSIGNMENT FOR MY FUCKING CREATIVE WRITING CLASS BACK IN 2007.... TWO THOUSAND FUCKING SEVEN. WHAT THE FUCK.
IM SO FUCKING PISSED THE FUCKING FUCK OFF.
First of all, thank you VERY much for the comment <33
Second of all, your comment made me laugh! Which, i greatly needed.
And the next part (should) be out soon. Im almost done with it.
Hehe, thank you ^-^
And hehe, he may... or may not dig her ^-^ you'll find out in the next one? I think? I can't really remember, I wrote it ages age hehe
Hahaha, deep space sex... good idea! Haha, I guess you'll have to wait and see though ^-^
Should be more updates now though, 'cause I'm into my summer break ^-^
Haha, that they do... but in a way I'm just not happy with the way this is turning out... or well, how it flows together I shoudl say...
And I'm not gonna say anything about that 'cause it'll give it away ^-^
And that's true haha, it would be nice ^-^
I [i]might[/i] put another one up later on today 'cause I keep posting every 3 weeks instead of every 2 ^-^
That and I've got comments not very long after I posted ^-^