Thanks for your comment on my story Forbidden! I really appreciate it I'm glad you find the pace not too fast; that can be a huge issue me because I'm quite impatient.
Fanks for the continued support! :3 In response to your comment, sorry aboot the shift in character ;-; I am currently writing her as developing character so she's still her weak self but she's trying to be more useful and still learning how to look after herself. Her trust also gets in the way. She trusted Remus, even when she felt there was something wrong, and thus became her 'damsel' self. She still relies on Grigore heavily and always will. She is like any other human and incapable for fighting off monsters so she does it through Grigore by giving him her magic so she'll look to him whenever there's a monster she has no chance in handling by herself. Sorry about the shifting though but she'll swing from strong to weak depending on her situation and whether or not she can actually do anything ;-; If the shifting is too strong though and doesn't quite fit into to my explanation, let me know. I'll go over the recent parts and see what I can do to improve on it. Glad you're enjoying it still :3
Response to Old World comment! Hummm, that's a good suggestion. I'll try it out and see how it looks. If not, I may do something about Susan's end in the little short story collection thing I'll be working on over the next year. But thanks for the feedback on both endings. Good to know the newer ending was the better one. :3 While the flash-forward was interesting, it was jarring and didn't quite flow so had to change it. Also, for TWS, I laughed. A horror story (I say horror loosely for TWS...) wouldn't work if no one got into trouble, but I try to give it logic and reason at least. Nanat being about nine isn't one for common sense, especially when she's convinced she's saving her sisters, and Lyra wasn't about to let her run off with no one following her. Both daft but at least it kiiiind of makes sense. Woo. Thanks for the comments and support. :3
I thank ye for the contuining comments on TWs aaaaand I am sorry I have not updated recently. Health is bad and is blocking me from writing. It's annoying. I want to write but can't ;-; So I shall sleep and hope next week I'll be stronger. I thank you for your patience. :3
I had a look at what you pointed out, quietly agreed and fixed it. :3 Thank you for that. Also thanks for the continued support you've been giving :D Glad you're still around.