So i have two story's "Dethklok our way part one" and "Transparent" my favorite story out of these two is transparent i have future plans for it and i really badly needs advice i want you guys to read the both of the story's please and tell me what you guys think of both and tell me witch one i should keep.Your comment would be notice as soon as possible.I would love good feed back negative feed...

So i have this new story called "transparet" i had it up for a couple and only got one reader. I thought that mabey who ever is readig this journal will like to help the story get off its feet and start running?I wont mind if you don't read but please give it a chance its way better than my last one.Its an avenged story though a7x isnt in the first chapter they will show up in the story soon...

Ok so it took me two hours to wight chapter two for "after you move out" and i it was really good probly my greatest chapter yet then i try to submit it and it tells me to log in so i only got a couple ideas written down and the chapter is like 5 pages long if i wote it down i am so fucking mad so now i am going to have to wait cause i still have to right chapter 5 for the dethklok story and why...

this is sad cause my journal gotten more readers then my stories!!!!23 readers for my journal 8 readers for "dethklok our way" and only 2 for my new story "after you moved out" and well...sadley writers block hit me on "after you move out" ideas??that would be extremly helpful i hope i get more readers that will be kool cause my sister XMidnight_RockerX on of her stories gotten over 1000 readers...

ok so if you a new to writing atories my first advice is to never ever EVER!!! let your parents read them expiecally if they include cussing dirty sences what ever even if they are rated g or pg it wont matter what cause my parentsjudge my cussing in my stories and some dirty scene and in my family if u cuss when you where 8 till 11 to 13 it will be held against you for the rest of your life and...