Glad you think so! I was in the process of becoming severely jet lagged, so I'm glad it turned out well. After I sleep I'll write more. Had to end it, conditions were not conducive to writing at the time.
Thank you! So glad you're enjoying it so much, and that you find my author's notes amusing. They get better the more slaphappy I get. Anyway, I really appreciate your support!
Thank you for your comment on my story Think Twice.
I know what you mean about the dialogue, I'm working on fixing that.
After I re-read it myself I realized it. But thank you for letting me know :)
I love it when I get real feedback! haha. BUT Thank you for reading & commenting! I really appreciate it.