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Ehh i hate the warmth of sand because i dunno
I just hate it since like alwaya so yeah ....

Hello :) adore the page :)

Kinda a late comment but thank you for the comment on "My Morgan"

Hey Welcome (:

loved it! keep writing you have an amazing gift!

super duper late comment, aa. and yeah, I understand the concept of revealing as you go, but it was a tad confusing, I suppose? and you should add more description into your stories. you can use pretty adjectives and descriptive languages to make the story come to life. you do use a bit, but you could put a whole lot more into it to really let the readers see the world you're creating.

Ignorance is a really good song. My all time fav has to be The Only Exception, but I also love Franklin, Miz Biz, crushcrushcrush, and Renegade

Sure thing! It's great to meet new people. Love your profile by the way.

no
why would i read it

whats ur favorite song by them?

Hello.
I'm Korii. c;
I'll be sure to check your story out sometime. :)

haha Paramore is sooo the shiz

Hi, i'm derek. So i saw ur layout, and it beats mine...dangit!

sure thing, i'll check it out if i find the time. :) nice to meet you.

It was pretty good chapter! But it seemed a little bland. Like instead of going into details and using descriptive words, you just told what happened. But that can be a style in its own. Also, I seemed a little confused on what was going on; Why was she leaving? Where was she going? You never seemed to clarify what was actually happening, and instead of explaining it later you just sort of went on with the story, I suppose? I might've just missed something drastic, but that's what I caught from reading it. But good job! I'll definitely look forward to what'll happen next. :D

Nice to meet you, April! I'm Lyx. And sure! I'll look at it in just a second. :D

Your story was really good! The only thing I really recommend to change is the spelling "barely". The way it was spelled was "barley", but it made me giggle. Anyways, I really liked the story, keep it up! :]

I'm about to check out that story you told me to! I'd love if you read the first chapter of my new story "Letters To You" and told me what you think of it. (:

sure no problem sweety