I'm sorry for that . I enjoy them too. I was going to delete the chapter, but I liked the little shares in it that they had. I can spill this one too, if you'd like . Thank you so much for keeping up with it and sharing your thoughts. ♥
I'm so glad you enjoyed them!! And that you always get my characters! Like you nailed it for Copper, of course ; it is going to take a lot for her to understand and this story, regardless of not being planned, is going in that direction of her being difficult in that sense... aaaaaand since her and Johnny have an awesome pal thing growing he will be getting shit for it with her. I'm not quite sure what to expect either for what comes next but I'll dig in now. Thank you so much! I wouldn't have made the connection either!! Isn't it neato? Haha and yeah, this is the tune I was just talking about in the message!!!
ALLC: !! I feel so assured! Thank you!!! I thought moving things a little faster would help... things? Just super glad to know you feel like this version is better !
How awesome! (And oops . Well it was bound to happen sooner or later.) (Oh wow, I bet that's pretty hard. But then again, at the same time, kind of easy and neato? I mean to actually dig into it fresh and not really reference from the old but still know exactly where to go because of it. And that's really great for you to put limits on yourself so that you can focus! High five to that! )
Definitely agree to that. And woohoo! Hurry up and join this story, Lauren, damn.
Agreed and decided *slaps desk! I know *solemn Syn nod*, I know. And I know doesn't he?!! I think I've grown more and more and more interested in him lately haha (don't know if you can tell since he's starting to become bigger characters in some of my stories more often ) and he's so cool. I can't understnad it. I totally feel you on that! (Do I need to do the disney gifs motivational thing again like last time? Did that work? Did you feel the motivation? Haha, yeah...I know sorry stop while I'm ahead.)
Thanks !
And for Cooper! So glad you're excited for it!!! I don't want to pressure myself to think ahead but I catch glimpses of their future sometimes and *starry eyes. I think the character that makes Cooper is definitely steering itself in the direction of "complicated" (or I mean more so haha) but I hope its an understandable and "good" kind of complicated. Wait...? But... And Lauren! I feel like its already set up for her character to be too awesome as well so I can't wait for that either! But you loving this story ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ ♥ aslkfna;sdlknfa;ldgha;!!!
I know! I feel the same ! It's just like haha. I believe you; you definitely always have something clever to say and it certainly would have blown me away. (Yeah, I know that feeling, for sure, and it really does help me make that re connection. Kind of seems like you just instantly fall back in sync with the story, at least for me but hopefully it gets you out of there.)
I finally did! Woo! And I managed to cut out all of the 'it's just a damn jacket' lines and left one in a good spot I hope I left just one haha. I almost named the chapter that, but after reading over the line so much, and even after cutting them out, I felt it was a bit much for some reason. I don't know. Guess I was just a little exhausted of that line my fault, my fault. Oh jeez haha. That happens to me too sometimes but its just like you said, depends.
Yeah, exactly! Gosh . Haha yeah! Woohoo! Kind of hoping you picked that one but would have been awesome either way! I'll send whatever comes to mind in a message instead of typing it out here. And it has to be the freaking beard . (For sure! Well it'll definitely be worth it in the end I'm pretty sure you'll fall back in love with it in a heartbeat and it'll probably go faster than you think! Not that you haven't been in love with it, but you know what I mean. It'll feel right either way.)
Haha yeah, I guess so. Kind of dreading to look for an edit now though, oops . Aww haha, that always happens to me too. Seriously. But then I forget to care most of the time after like a minute or two? Yeah...most of the time.
It really doesn't and I'm getting a little stir-crazy because I feel like my characters are nagging in the background of life and some are way worse than others like wtf, but . No problem!! Yeah! Torn! I know! I feel the same somehow! I mean I know that you can guess what happens next often times with my stuff but I also love that I just 'boom' hit you with a chapter of feels *sigh. MEE? You want me to decide? That's impossible! Pressure! I don't know which to share! Oh gosh! Hmmm, well, which sounds more appetizing? Sneaky way of getting you to pick, right? (Rewriting always makes me happier with them too, and I can't wait to re dig into the few I first posted once upon a time because I've reworked them. But certainly understand you on this! I couldn't imagine reworking that huge of a word count! That's definitely your best bet, though. Follow your gut! )
Yeah hahaha my rough draft that I attempted the other day is currently made up of that line because it was a pain in the ass that insisted on coming out. How fun it will be to fix haha. Aw no worries. I look like a weirdo all the dang time; 24/7.
That's awesome! Well I hope some of those stories occasionally slip out. !
Well thank you so much! !!!! I've been a little busy these last few days which definitely doesn't help haha but I'll let you know how it goes before I take you up on it. I'll always keep that in mind! Thank you! Also I usually always want to ask about something or everything but then I'm like naaaahhhhhh, I shouldn't because of reasons (mostly just me not wanting to bother anyone). Definitely, though, same goes for you! If you ever need anything I'm always here and I'll always give my best !.. I honestly want to just tell them all to you right now and just spoil everything haha ! Seriously. Like I want to spew out all of the Billie and Z makes already I just want someone to know with me! Or Astrid and Brian dammit! For reals! Fangirl over my thoughts and spoils of one damn story!!! But, *sigh. (Oh gosh, that's what's made me stuck on so much too; just noticing way too many issues or being unhappy with how it was written. But that's crazy! What?! ...But, you know, it could be exciting to revisit and revamp right? Gotta look at the bright side sometimes . Holy shit, dude!!
Yeah, and sitting down with the chapter is a little rough now because it wants to come out in every freaking line I type haha hhhhh. I like that it's so ridiculous now though because it gets my brain moving in the direction of "they must not actually be done with each other, obviously , pfft bunch'a weirdos" haha. I literally can't see into the future for these guys but... we'll see I suppose. < I forgot what I was actually going to put there before it had a chance to come out .
Oh jeez!!! I can't handle this!!! My side!
I'll have to remember that too. For sure. FACE OF DETERMINATION.
Yeeeeaaaaahhhhhhhh no worries, my mind is kind of gone now anyways.
Oh my! That's so sweet of you!! You have no idea how sweet exactly it is! Serious! I could cry with happiness of the sweetnessessseses! But I'd feel like a pain in the ass for a friend if I did that even though you said it'd be no hassle . Legit, pain in the ass...or something along similar lines. And for reals, I've been trying to focus on Astrid this whole time but Billie just won't go away so I don't even know what I'm doing right now; otherwise Astrid would've already been updated . But I guess I'm putting time into ALLC at the moment *cough*or maybe just deleting what I have to seem productive*cough! But yes ma'am all of the above. I guess since I can't help myself from writing into those right now that they're more entertaining than what's going on in their world at current, so. I can't wait for readers to get there with me ! Haha. (Need any help with the stuck? I could try to help with the stuck if you like.)
I'm glad you liked that one and Sushi Saloon . Don't ask haha. And that's so freakin weird that you say that!!! Just a damn jacket!! In my "notes to remember what points to make for the next chapter" after I wrote the last update, I put "It's just a fucking jacket"!! No joke haha. But I don't know whos thoughts it'll be in yet, either Z's or in Cooper's. Definitely one of the two but we'll see.
Haha oh jeez, that all makes this even better! Your mother, I swear!