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I love your imagination! Haha that was the best .
It should come out in time, for sure. But oh man, am I doing a bad job with her? I think the story will be pretty slow moving because of her character honestly. And since I'm trying to fix it, its sort of clashing a lot with how I imagine her, but hopefully I'll get it to work out better so that everything fits .
I'm so glad that you still love the story though and woah! Thank you so much for pointing that out, I didn't notice! I'll fix it asap ♥♥♥♥♥♥

Probably not hahahah and got it,

Astrid's mum needs to get the stick out of her ass! LOL! You're the best ever!

Haha, well, then I'm glad I did that xD Yeah, she shouldn't have any doubts at all. I think she's pissing off everybody, lol. Even me. I don't believe she could ever go back to being the same friend she was in the beginning, though. There's been a lot of crappy things happening between her friendship with Sid for them to be easily forgotten about... Yes, I completely agree with you; absolutely unnecessary. And yeah, Zacky showed his more protective side on the last chapter. I'm happy you found it cute ^.^

I thought so :P And that's exactly how I feel; that question regarding if they would work out or not needed to be solved. Yes, that's right. Sid told her about her kiss with Zacky but after that Izzie kind of went back to being a bitch. Even when Sid invited Leana over to tell her how she had gotten together with Zacky, Izzie was already doubting her and suspecting if there were still some feelings left for Matt. And no, you're right. I think Paige didn't need to act like that at all. A serious talk would have been enough, without any hysteria or unneeded drama.

Yeah, I even thought about skipping over the invite but I realized how important it was, even if it's small or boring to go over. We'll all see why in the next few chapters...or actually, even all the way up until we get to that part in the prologue. It just changes things for her in terms of added pressure and I'm seriously happy that you remembered that! Also, I'm glad you hate her

There wasn't much insight on his side, I know. I rarely mentioned his point of view, but I didn't think any of you would want to know about his random arguments with Paige. I think what they need is exactly a chance to see how far they can go like this - I mean, with them being interested solely on each other. Haha, I know how you feel. I really do. I myself am getting tired of Paige's bitchiness as well... Besides, she doesn't even spend her time with Sid anymore. And trying to turn Paige against Sid was definitely something completely unnecessary. Paige and Matt broke up more or less a month before that happened. And Paige was that pissed because she always thought Sid liked Matt, but Sid always told her that she never liked him, so she thought that Sid lied about her feelings all the time. And yeah, she believed Sid, but that argument could have been avoided...

Haha, yeah, I guess xD They argued because Matt's situation with Sid had never been spoken about before. He never knew if he could have had a shot with her or not before their talk. But now that he knows her side and decided that she would be better together with Zacky rather than with him he'll try to fix things with Paige; he even admitted he had developed some strong feelings towards her while they were together. That doesn't mean that everything will turn out alright, or that he's completely over Sid; or maybe it will, who knows...? xD Oh, I couldn't agree any more with you on that point. I love when they are not serious, too. Yeah, I know... Izzie's got a weird behavior at times...

Lucky you. My teachers always found a way not to start rambling again... I think he's pretty much excused himself with his obliviousness and, sometimes, dumbness x) And yeah, he's definitely trying to give things another try with Paige, even though they're still only friends. Oh, I wouldn't want them to keep running away from what needed to be fixed anymore. I just wanted to see them together too, to be honest. And I'm also really happy that you liked the previous chapter so much ^.^ I thought that them joking was something natural to them, that's why I decided to make that scene the way it was :P And yeah, there has been some progress with Izzie as well!
Haha, I believe it'll be great :)

Well, yeah, exactly. I don't think it would be very mother-like of her if she didn't keep that in mind. Oh, yeah. Sometimes my teachers would remember that they were rambling in the middle of class and try to go back to teaching. I'm glad you still like Matt, though. I wouldn't want anyone getting mad at him xD Well, they did change as time passed by, even if it took quite some time. And it's really great that you're happy with their kiss ^^ As for Matt not wanting the kiss to happen... well, he was together with Paige for a long time. He actually ended up developing some strong feelings towards her. The Sid running away thing will be fixed on the next chapter. She was all nervous.
Oh, take the time you need. I'm really excited about it, too, even though I haven't read it yet xD But it'll surely be as awesome as you think it is!

Ahah, maybe that'll happen, even though it'll take a lot of convincing for her to at least start seeing him as a good person xD Yes! And they would only realize that they spent the entire class talking about other things instead of teaching when it was almost time for the class to finish! Ugh, I know... many people are having the same feelings about Matt. I felt so bad while I was reading some of the comments I got But hey, you looked at the bright side of the situation! They finally got almost everything out in the open! :D I do understand you wholeheartedly when it comes to Sid and Zacky being super cute with all their jealousy. I love it ^^ Oh my, when that drunk kiss happened the two of them getting together was definitely not a possibility. They really hated each other's guts during that time xD
Yeah, I thought it was a pretty awesome beginning. I'm really curious to read more of it. I love the whole supernatural and mystic vibes in stories :P I'm okay with the fairy tale vibe not transferring into the actual story. I'm pretty sure I'll like it still x)

Exactly. And yeah, you're definitely right about her mom. I think most moms would think like that. I'm glad you like Sid's mom that much, though! She's probably my favorite less-recurring character. I can't promise you she'll warm up to Zacky... I can't promise I won't crush your dreams, either... Ugh, I know! I also really loved those classes when my teachers would completely drift off the subject they were teaching and start talking about their lives. It was great, too. Oh, he'll definitely drive you crazy. And if you're reading this comment before reading the next update... please prepare yourself... and don't get close to any knives... or anything that could stab people... But yeah, I couldn't agree more that Sid and Zacky's jealousy is the cutest thing ever. And I'm also very happy that you also made up your mind about who you're wanting her with, eheh... :3

Yes! That's exactly how I wanted you to feel about him!! I can't even explain how happy I am that you got that too! no joke !!!

I guess that's true. I think it was quite noticeable that they were hitting a really low point in their friendship for a while now. Maybe it'll get better, maybe it won't... who knows? Yes, hearing those words on another context would make much more sense and it would surely sting a whole lot less than it did. Sid can't really go anywhere until she finishes school. Her mother wouldn't even let her move on her own. Oh they were definitely the best! Especially when they had absolutely nothing to do with whatever class they were being played on. Well... let's just say that Matt is a hard-ass (not really sure if that's the right word, but it's making sense to me). He'll only change his opinion after a reaaaally long time, when he finally gets too many proofs that things are actually different. I know... I'm conflicted too. I reach the point where I think I finally made up my mind, but then I end up changing my opinion again, and it's like a vicious cycle... Even though I've already decided all of that and it's already written on the story document xD

Yeah, many people believed she would change for the best. I would believe that too (if I wasn't the one writing the story haha). I tend to empathize everyone too. I don't think her attitude would be very different if she had heard their talk from the beginning... But sure, they need to make up because Sid isn't going anywhere :P Oh, watching movies during classes. That used to be my favorite thing right after the field trips! Haha, I figured you'd be happy with them breaking up xD I can't say I'm very upset with them breaking up either, because I'm not. And you're definitely right when it comes to the opinion that Paige was much more into him than he was with her. He made that pretty obvious. Well, I can tell you that Matt wants that to happen, even though he still thinks their relationship is pretty much the same as it was before he got together with Paige. And I was hoping you'd feel conflicted between Matt and Zacky :) That was my point, exactly haha!

It definitely is. It's one of my favorites too xD

That might be the best option, haha! Well, I don't know if you'll change that opinion with this next update or not... but yeah, I believe that she's changed for the worst in terms of their friendship - that's for sure. She's taking things a little too far, though, in my opinion. That teacher is actually based off a teacher I had last year. xD She was not that good when it came to teaching us and making us actually learn something, but she was the nicest person ever. She even wanted to plan a trip to another city with us, even though we reached the end of the year without planning anything at all :P She was really cool. I have to agree with that, lol. I don't like their clingy-ness either x) Although now you know that they're fighting. And regarding what Matt seemed to want to tell Sid during their class... I wasn't expecting that to be one of the highlights (per say) of that chapter, though I'm glad that people seemed to pick up on that. The truth is that he was only trying to make some sort of conversation with her, seeing as they're drifting apart every day. I just felt like telling you that because I won't talk about that on the next chapters :P

Yeah, she worries too much and he's such an ass. Oh, Brian tsk tsk.
And no because those are my favorite parts to write haha.

Exactly. I guess it wouldn't be fun if we didn't have one thing that scared us or something like that.

Haha, true! I can't really promise you that you won't have to wait much more time... they're way too complicated. That's true. Izzie has inevitably changed for the worst... it only depends on her if she decides to change her attitude or not... Well, there are cool teachers, still xD But yeah, Matt asking his teacher for Paige to come with him is the stupidest thing, in my opinion. It was a school thing, not a friend's gathering. And I couldn't agree more with that last statement. They should really spend some time apart. I'm super glad you were smiling throughout the last chapter, though :P They really were cute.

Ugh, I know. I agree with that wholeheartedly.

Yeah, the deaths don't bother me much. If I can deal with any other creature, I think I can deal with invisible dogs xD

I know. I think everyone's feeling that way by now, haha xD They have so much stuff going on that it's going to take awhile until they both decide to try and fix their problems. That makes sense. And I have to agree with you on the Zacky comforting her thing. I honestly thought it'd be better, too. He was the only one of her friends who knew her father after all. And you could't be any more right about Izzie. Things are really bad between her and Sid. I thought you'd be used to Matt trying to bring Paige to everything, by now, considering he spends all of his time with her. But yeah, he had absolutely no reason to invite her over...

Yeah, that's true. And there's always people who learn how to produce them and sell them. They'll probably never stop that.

Indeed it is. Even if I got used to imagine that description, it doesn't hurt to try and imagine an invisible force. Even if it kills people the way it does xD

Haha, he really never realizes any of the important stuff. It's hurting me to see them growing so unattached as well, but they're both at fault for that... And they'll keep ignoring their problems and getting way too upset with them, too. There's definitely a communication problem between them. Haha, I had no idea you felt that way about her relationship with Zacky xD I knew that their cinema night, with switching the movies and all that, would look way too confusing in the beginning, especially with the movie that was supposedly going to play x) And I'm glad you didn't mind Zacky replacing Matt in comforting her about her father. Matt couldn't do much, since he didn't even know what was going wrong with her.

Exactly. It's still a problem, nevertheless.