emilyann. / Comments

you asked me to do that before

I'll do that..
Just not right now kay?

sure fellow emily :) .
i'll do that as soon as i come home from dinner.

Of course. I'll read it. :)

Of course. (: I'll read it as soon as I come back from class later on.

haha umm hi, and sure, ill do it :)
right now acutally

Ya no problem I will read your story. :)

Eh, hey. :P Sure, I'll read it. :)

Heyy! (:
I will read it as soon as I am on a computer
for internet right now, I'm using my iPod Touch
It would be kind of hard to read it on here.
But I promise I will read it ASAP. (:

Sure, (:
i'll read it as soon as possible.

your welcome
and thanks if you read them lol :P
but thats cool update when you can

No problem! It was definitley a good read :)

Oh please do read it! I'm dying for people to haha. Take as long as you need.

Okay, I will (:

the subjects you talk about are sad, though things in the story seem to happen quite fast.. but maybe that's just me. overall, i think the buildup around her brother's death is very interesting (:

YAY! cant wait

sweeeeet!

Alright, no problem. :)

Yeah, it makes sense, but I really think you should remove the "but" from the beginning of the sentence. It makes her sound like she's arguing with Maddie, even though they're both clearly not. It'll flow more smoothly, I think: "He is not the man I married."

You don't have to, of course, but I'm just saying.

Well I'll talk to you tomorrow I'm going to turn in early :] Night.

Exactly.
I mean I may not fully believe love exists in our screwed up modern world but maybe I'm just waiting for someone to prove me wrong.