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  • nedfrid.

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    Hey! Thank you so much for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
    March 19th, 2013 at 06:29pm
  • Collisionscope

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    You're very welcome! :3 I'd absolutely love to read some of your other works. With the way you write, I think I'll have my after-work reading cut out for me.

    You can definitely PM me whenever you would like and I'll read it for you. :3 I enjoy helping out fellow writers.
    July 11th, 2012 at 06:08am
  • River Song

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    Thanks, you too! :3
    July 11th, 2012 at 05:27am
  • Monster!

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    Hey thank you so much for the comment! :) I will describe the other characters later on, they all have history and meaning behind them. And I will do some research on some of the characters with whom's issues I'm not familiar, but I'm determined to use everything I know in this story from eating disorders to abusive families. Hoping to break some stereotypes, you know? :)
    July 11th, 2012 at 03:23am
  • River Song

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    Thanks for the comment on Camp Opalescent. I've written several more chapters, and I'm editing them for Mibba as we speak, and I can promise you the characters develop more. It's weird, the way I am, I like to develop my characters and show their appearance through dialogue. Probably a bad strategy, but I like it. For some reason or another, I don't like to give too much away in the first chapter. That'll probably hurt me more than help me, but oh well!

    I do have to disagree with one thing though, I did specify on what color Katy's hair was, at the beginning of the first chapter. :PP

    Thanks for the comment, though, I really appreciate it, and when I'm doing my final edits after I'm done writing, I'll definitely add in some more imagery!
    July 10th, 2012 at 09:12pm
  • A Little Lost

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    Thank you very much for your comment on Maudlin Melody! After reading through it, I realised that what you said about the dialogue was very true. I'll try to make it smoother if I can ^^

    I'm glad you feel that way! I really, really appreciated your comment :'3
    July 10th, 2012 at 07:39pm
  • Sansa Stark

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    Thank you! But can you just explain how is it not a sentence, I'm sort of confused, lol. And I'm going to correct it, I should do it right.
    July 10th, 2012 at 01:26pm
  • boyking

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    thanks for the comment on east avenue! i appreciate you admiring it's simplicity, and for the honesty in needing to work on first person narrative.
    July 10th, 2012 at 05:22am
  • alert.

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    thank you.
    i'm morgan.
    November 7th, 2011 at 03:30am
  • HaveYouSeen MyZombie

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    Heyyy! I'm Beth, thanks for the welcome. =)
    November 7th, 2011 at 02:13am