Changing Title

I'm thinking of changing my story from"I remember our first kiss" to "Inanimate Child"Or something along the lines of Alice being broken. Because when I was in school yesterday, my friend [a guy] was reading my story [i printed it out] and some dudes were saying, oh that sounds so cheesy!but its not! guys LOVE my story, even if it is lubby dubby or w/e. so i was sitting in my chair a while ago,...
February 6th, 2008 at 02:32pm