the boy with bread. / Comments

Thank you for your comment on Human Clay.

thank you, it means so much. :)

Thanks for the story comment, much appreciated! :)

okay then...

Thanks very much for the story comment. :)

explain more, cuz i was just thinking of extending it

that confused me...what were your thoughts on the last chapter?

well, yew seem to be more fluent in story writting, so yew try a draft and we'll just see how it works, cuz you could just say whether or not the ending will be determined yet, it doesnt need to end yet

and...i could help with the concepts and main plots? concidering it's a strong point, what about graduation, something about all her friends saying theyll be there for her even when she goes out to collage(say something about collage with the kid) and a line could be "im starting a new life without you, but youll always be right here"

and...if it's not too much, could i get some credit for this? like, a name somewhere or something...i just want to see this go further

it seems like it's becomming a hit, i just read a different short story that had the same ending so that is part of the reason why i didnt really care for the ending, i could help otherwise, i have a couple of ideas for it, you could write all the chapters and we could see if they would be good before deciding to go on further, cuz if yew can pull it off, it will be nothing short of a masterpiece, and id be willing to help...im kinda an idea person...

thank you. :)

Thankyou very much for the story comment, I'm proud of that chapter.
[sort of]


But you are my favorite person. XD

Thank you soooo much! This is something that's caused me so much pain and hurt and it's great for me to get it out. Thanks. (:

you're quite welcome c:
it's the first story written in letters that i've actually liked.
great job n__n

You're welcome. ::))

And thank you. :::)))

Phew! Haha - thanks, found it on photobucket myself =D

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I did, just if you didn't know [:
i think i put up three more chapters? two maybe...
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Thank you for the comment on Pretty Strangers!

One question - in the layout, can you see the picture of the bike? Because on my computer I can but on my dad's I can't :s

thanks for commenting on my story
i really do appreciate it

As much as I'd like for you to do that too, I think the tragedy makes the story that much more compelling. It's amazing =0)