TabbyKitty13 / Comments

Firstly thank you very much for the very detailed comment.

I do generally agree with everything you have said, I know I need to correct some of my spelling and grammar, it has always been my weak point. I never rushed it, but I do know the exact plan for the story and at first just had to get everything down so it would clear my head.

I will be honest, some of the scenarios are silly, when I thought of my story I did have it as a sort of rom-com in my head and we all know how silly the situations can be in those. I just wanted a bit of a fun story, yes Louise is sort of immature but speaking from experience I feel I can be too, sometimes we just all need to revert back a little.

With regards to them moving quickly, yes they are and yes Louise does actually care, however she just likes him that she is just going to go with the flow, see where things go.

Kirsten does have one more planned bang, so to speak.

I will probably go back and edit my chapters, I am having a mini break only because I know how the story is going, I know the dialogue in my head, I just need to get it written down. Just started a new job and my shifts don't leave much writing time.

However I do really appreciate the comment, I just wanted to clarify a few bits, it is clear that you have read the story and I'm very pleased you have enjoyed it.

Lauren.

@ Qhuinn
I know what you mean. I just got a critique saying my descriptions threw off the first chapter of my new story. XD

@ TabbyKitty13
Oh no its not your fault. It was a happy cry.

And I know how it is.
Sadly, sometimes it detracts from what my characters are doing so I have to watch how much I describe stuff.

@ Qhuinn
Aww, I didn't mean to make you cry with my username, but it must be nice to have such a close friend. I've always moved around so I've never experienced it.

I'm pretty wordy with my descriptions as well, so I have to stop myself. That's probably why I enjoy description so much - I like to know the color of the bug in the corner. Just adds depth. (:

I can't wait for more!

Thank you for your comment (and subscription) to When Night Falls. I got giddy as hell when I saw your comment. The spelling mistakes are no doubt over sights from both my editor and myself, Ill read back over it to correct them. As for the description, a lot of it was edited out due to my excessive wordiness and over description of everything and nothing.

Again thank you for your comment. It made my night. :)

Please forgive any spelling or grammar mistakes in this comment. Im cirrently on my phone aand it hates text input.

P.s. And on a very personal note that you might think is weird: Your username made me tear up a bit. I really like it. My best friend of years (Im talking 10+) name is Tabitha, I call her Tabby and my name is Katlyn and she calls me Kitty. Your username reminded me how much I miss her (shes currently serving a two year deployment with the US Army in South Korea.).

I think Im going to go write her a letter now.

@ Aisdais
No problem at all! Glad to have been of help.

Thank you very much for your comment. I'm really glad you liked 'The Gifted Star' and thank you so much for subscribing. I appreciate the advice and I'll try my best to fix all of the problems. Thanks :D

@ violet veins
No problem! Glad I could be of assistance. (:

Just wanted to stop by and say thank you for the comment! It's really helped me relax and understand that I can't please everyone. Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.

@ TabbyKitty13
Thank you so much!

@ violet veins
Oh, xD my name is Tabby!

@ violet veins
Wow, this means so much to me. I've never been anyone's idol for anything, in any spectrum, so I'm really touched that you said that. I'm so happy you find my story so enjoyable, and I'm so glad I could inspire you to start your own piece. I would be more than happy to critique your story. (: Look for my comment!

Hi there.

I've commented on Caretaker a few times, but never really introduced myself. So hi, I'm Devin. My username is useless because I change it about three times a week.

I've read your story and I just love it so much. You really capture a post-apocalyptic world very nicely and it doesn't overwhelm the reader with details but still manages to throw in challenges and such. Also your characters are exactly like real people and it's just amazing.

Which is why I would absolutely love it if you could read and maybe comment on the first chapter or two of this. The environment and world were inspired by the world you've created in Caretaker, but I just feel like I'm lacking something. I've gotten a ton of mixed review on it, and getting a comment from someone like yourself, who seems to know what they're doing and actually has writing to prove it, would really mean a lot to me. There isn't any pressure - I know you're probably busy with the end of the school year (I know I am), so if you don't want to that is absolutely fine. You never know unless you ask, right?

Also I really apologize for doing this. I'm not one to advertise my stories like a maniac, but you really are an idol of mine, literature wise, and I'd appreciate it more than you'd know.

@ a mimosa pudica
I'm generally an active writer, but I've had life hitting me up. My Junior finals are coming up here in a couple weeks, so after that we can definitely expect more updates.

No hurry to read it, but if you do I hope you enjoy it. (:

Why, thank you! I saw your story recently. I plan on reading it soon but not right now, I'm afraid. Too busy with so many things. I'm not good with juggling a lot of things sometimes.

Are you an active writer here? I don't believe you've updated your stories in a while.

@ a mimosa pudica
If you do, I'll definitely read it. (: Throw poor Jem a bone, maybe?

She really did! I thought that it was already the end but she included the romance Will and Tessa never had in the past books.

I was thinking of writing a fan-fiction really, about Will.

@ a mimosa pudica
I really liked how she gave everyone what they wanted. Although, I think maybe Tessa is also selfish. :T

@ TabbyKitty13
Well she's a she. Read The Selection written by her.

I cried like 3 times!! I can't believe it. I thought that he was brother Zechariah in the Mortal Instruments!! What happened to him there?

It was a sad yet happy ending. She's so lucky to love Jem again.

@ a mimosa pudica
I've never heard of him/her.

I cried through the WHOLE ending, and then when it finally ended, I kept crying for like 10 minutes. xD