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  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    I'm glad you like Kurt! :D And hm, I've never heard one of my character's thoughts being described as attractive...but I think that's pretty darn awesome. So I'm glad you like her mind! Thanks so much for commenting! I love reading them. :)
    May 18th, 2012 at 03:00am
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    Forgive me for not answering sooner.
    Sometimes when I get that little red link, I only think that one person has commented, when actually three have commented - I'm so lazy that I don't check properly, and end up missing the other two comments :(
    So if I don't reply that soon, it's cause of my own idiocy, not because of you :)

    ANYWAY. Yep, people will get freaked out at such things. Only fangirls will understand fangirls. 'tis a sad, sad world.

    The Vampire Diaries is quite good, so I do recommend them for a little bit of night-time reading. And although they fall into the Vampire Romance category, they are not too much like Twlight. They have the love triangle thing going on, but they actually feed on humans, and the love interest. Well, one of them does. So it makes it more 'vampiry'.

    Aw I'm sorry, I'm just a hitchhiker of sorts anyway. Wherever my parents go, I must go. Because I'm still 13. Yep. Hitchhiker.

    I suck at Art too, and my sister is pretty good. For an eight year old :)
    She is constantly drawing Miley Cyrus... I really don't like Miley Cyrus.

    I do know the feeling, though. You're the only one that's bad at something in your whole family, so you're considered an oddity. But nevermind. YOLO.

    Apparently cool people say YOLO.
    I didn't even know what it stood for until I googled it.
    Says something about me.
    Google is like my God, I swear. He gives me all the answers :')

    Ha, thank you but it really was bad. It was so cliche, and blah.
    And when I say cliche, I mean cliche. It was supposed to be horror, so I had my friends acting weird and being possesed, and scary dreams about my friends turning into gingerbread men and crumbling to the ground (hence 'Gingy).

    No, I'm serious. Actual dream that my main character had.
    All of your stories are so good, though. I'm sure that younger you couldn't have been that bad.

    I had a similiar thing going on in when I was younger, only my work was covered in CP marks. I sucked at punctuation. I would but capital letters on random words and forget to put a comma so my whole paragraph was really long like this sentence is turning out to be.

    I know, it hurts. Have you seen the 'awkward penguin' meme's? When they point out socially awkward situations? That awkward little penguin meme describes my life. And the 'Me Gusta' meme.

    Odd question, but what meme do you most relate to? Curiosity got the better of me :)

    Ha, that's awesome! Maybe you're what started it...? O.O

    Nah, it's not lame: it's cool, actually. I plagarized a meme, and you included a childhood memory. I think we can guess which one is more creative here.

    Dea x
    May 17th, 2012 at 09:23pm
  • amaranthine.

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    Unfortunately we don't do much creative writing in English in school. :( And when we do, I'm not very good at it, because we always have to write short stories...and as you can see, I'm not very good at keeping my stories short.

    And thanks for the story comment! I'm glad it's making you feel all excited - that was one of my favourite chapters of the entire story, so I'm glad you seemed to like it as much as I did!
    May 15th, 2012 at 10:54am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Ah, yes, the ongoing dilemma of situations not being black and white. It's hard, definitely. And yeah, Evie's life isn't going so well. I feel kind of badly for her, too. Ha-ha. Thank you for commenting!
    May 15th, 2012 at 12:05am
  • amaranthine.

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    Yeah, it probably was more of a nightmare. :D That's one of the only times I've properly thought about the Operation though - it's something that the characters find so terrible, but I've never really thought about it in so much detail before (it's not really something I want to think about, after all). It just frustrated me when I would tell people I had a nightmare, so they were asking 'what was it about?' and then I didn't really know what to tell them, because my friends and family know absolutely nothing about my writing, and I like to keep it that way.
    May 13th, 2012 at 09:49pm
  • paracosm.

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    It's actually really hard for me to lie about things like that, all of my friends know what I'm like. :(

    Have you read the Vampire Diaries? The series isn't that good, it's dragged on a little, but the books are amazing. And Damon dies in the 7th one. I thought I was going to freaking drown in the tears I was producing, at 3am in a unknown hotel in Prague. It was the weirdest situation XD

    Yeah I'm slipping in all of the subjects I don't care enough about. Basically all the artistic subjects - I'm just not an artist, ha.
    Yeah the only social moments I have is at other friends houses when we watch movies and bitch about girls in our year... Yep.
    Mwahaha, I deleted it >:D
    Nobody can ever read it again! I used to do that: not with my online stories, but everywhere else. Which is just as bad. Now I try to speak properly when I'm conversing with people. It's just so awkward when people correct your 5 mistaken spellings, and you seem like such a goof. :'(

    Yep, I keep on swapping and changing, but I adore this one! :) The avatar depicts my facial expression perfectly, and it is of course a meme. Meme's will be the death of me, honestly. Out of curiousity, why is your username 'Chooseday.''?
    May 13th, 2012 at 01:46pm
  • amaranthine.

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    I'm glad you picked up on that line. Initially, I wasn't sure whether to include it or not, 'cause I thought it sounded a bit weird, but I'm glad I did keep it in. :D

    Omg, I had a dream the other night that I was Hurricane and I was about to have the Operation! (I know you probably don't care, but no one else will actually understand what the hell I'm talking about). It was pretty damn scary! At least now I can empathise with my characters' fears a bit more now. ;D
    May 12th, 2012 at 09:58pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    No, don't apologize! :) Your comments are wonderful to read, and I quite enjoy them. Plus, I think the only thing similar between the two was that you said 'at least' at the end...which isn't a big deal at all. Ha-ha.

    Yeah, Evie's mom was kind of harsh, but I don't think she realized that what she said was kind of...cutting, I guess would be a way to word it. And I'm glad that you like the chemistry between Garrett and Evie as siblings. :D As always, thank you so much for taking the time to drop a comment!
    May 8th, 2012 at 08:50pm
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    Ah, 'cause that's life, I guess. It doesn't stop or adjust itself to make everyone happy. And now Evie's gonna have to miss something that she really loves (that she's just realized how much she actually does love) because of old choices and things that happened to her in her past. It's not fun, but...oh, well. Ha-ha. And yes, Puck is being a little cutie. :D Thanks so much for commenting!
    May 7th, 2012 at 10:11pm
  • paracosm.

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    Yeah, lumps in throats... it's really hard to swallow those damn things!
    Oh, I'm sorry. I feel your pain, and give you a reassuring cyber pat on the back. I do like walking in the rain, but there are limits to the amount of rain, and when it actually happens. Parades... don't go well with rain, as you already know! Ha, I usually do eat breakfast, but I woke up half an hour later and I had to rush, therefore missing breakfast. The horrors of Music - even with breakfast I could sleep through it. Yep, subjects that I doze off in I don't really do well in... :)
    Aww I'm sure you have a life: I mean, I'm truly the one with no life, as being a thirteen year old usually revolves around school. And Mibba. Yeah.

    Aww, thank you, it's the same here really: I adore your short stories, as I've mentioned. Oh, and you didn't look at my other chaptered story, right? Gingy? O.o
    It's really bad, I wrote it when I was eight and decided to put it on here for a laugh: I keep on avoiding the decision to delete it. But I have to. It's the worst piece I've ever written :( I don't mean what I said above in a mean way, I'm actually hoping you didn't because I don't really want to subject you to that ^.^

    Dea x
    May 6th, 2012 at 01:50am
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    Dude! YOU are awesome. Cyberhug reciprocated. :D
    May 5th, 2012 at 09:49pm
  • amaranthine.

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    I like your comments - I don't mind if they're more commentary-ish. They're still useful, because they let me know that someone is as interested in the story as I am, and it's the one time that I actually get to talk about the Dreamers to someone!
    And when people comment, I feel more like updating - it's really depressing to post, like, five chapters without a single response, but all the time I'm getting comments, it makes me want to update more, because I know I have people who want to read what I'm posting. :D
    May 4th, 2012 at 11:14pm
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    Hehe yeah I do the same, I was talking about a alleged ''villian'' in a essay and nearly called him an Asshole. Fun Times, Fun Times....

    I return the cyber high five, hug and squeal! :3
    In real life, I'm not actually that emotional, but when it comes to stories I go all sensitive and start weeping over the characters. Which is odd as it seems I care more for fictional characters then I do for literal family members.
    I don't, obviously XD Sad writing just strikes a chord, I suppose. Have you ever cried over a Mibba story?

    Oh I'm so sorry about what happened, and I'm glad that she didn't go crazy...
    :(

    Aww thank you, I really like your new username/avatar. It suits you, in a sense!

    Oh, I'm sorry about that, how come you have to parade through the city centre? And you're welcome :)

    My day/s have been as good as school can be - I nearly fell asleep in Music, because I had gone to bed really late and I had not eaten anything: No Food For Whole Day + Early Morning = 0% Energy.
    I'm glad I didn't fall asleep, though. I kinda zoned out and daydreamed, just deeper then usual.

    Ahh, I haven't talked with you for around 10 days (yeah I counted, because when I saw 22nd of April I felt guilty for not answering sooner XD).

    I've kind of neglected my profile comments recently...

    Thank you for the story comment, you really didn't have to do such a nice thing! :D

    Dea x
    May 2nd, 2012 at 10:06pm
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    Yep. And a fifth. And a sixth. tehe

    I know it may be a bit ambitious writing such a long series, but I've decided I like the Dreamers enough to make it into a big thing. I started off with two books - one that was basically the story of Chasing Imagination, and one that somehow revolved around a revolution, and everything has grown from there!
    May 2nd, 2012 at 09:48pm
  • amaranthine.

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    That's okay. I like updating regularly because it keeps people interested and, actually, the whole story of HH is basically written; I just need to edit it as I post each chapter. (In fact, I'm also working on books three and four at the moment. tehe)
    May 2nd, 2012 at 05:36pm
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    Yeah, I like to remind readers that Hurricane is still human once in a while. :D She doesn't cry very often, but I think even she has been devastated by what's just happened.
    April 30th, 2012 at 10:46pm
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    Thanks for commenting on HH again - I always love your comments! You're the only person I've met who gets as excited about my stories and my characters as I do, and I like having someone to talk to about the Dreamers. I'm now just hoping that the end of the book will live up to your expectations - I certainly don't want to disappoint! tehe
    April 30th, 2012 at 08:44pm
  • AmorarEsDeVivir

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    Thank you so much for the comment on "Born of Poetry!" Were you commenting on that as part of the swap I posted about? If so, do you have any particular poem you'd like me to comment on?
    April 30th, 2012 at 04:59am
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    Your comments consistently make me so giddy and they brighten my day so much. I can't express how grateful I am that you enjoy the series because then I'll sound super mushy and corny, but just know that your feedback always makes me smile! :D
    April 29th, 2012 at 09:54pm
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    You're most welcome! :D
    April 22nd, 2012 at 02:39pm