Ren_rum / Comments

Thank you for giving me your mibba because This Is Our Sweet Blasphemy is just.....AMAZING!!!

i ;love your sweet blasphemy story

please finish on frail wing of vanity and wax and the newest one youve started :D theyre so good :)

Do you think you can make an AndyxAshley fic with the song Porn Star Dancing by My Darkest Days? I think you can do great things with that song! And I love your stories (or is it story's? I don't know I'm not english XD) Keep on writing!!!

I saw a Motionless In White quote in your About Me...
I smiled.

Oh and i love your Andley fan fics :)

I just read your about me and think you're really cool and we have lots in common!!! We listen to the same music and like the same kinda guys. I'm not scene though. I think myself more of an emo. Even though I'm not really that fond of labels. I'm also bi. I believe in God but I'm not gonna try and convert you though. It's just stupid. You believe what you wanna believe i have no problem with that. So yea we have lots in common :)

Because " cool story bro" isnt a troll. You know girlie, your pathetic

hey i luv ur bvb wax wings fic soz im yired so cnt write proper
i mean i think i may have found of my new fav imaginary couple
XD

Oh yeah- try making your own fucking comebacks in the future. You just sound stupid otherwisr

See. The thing youre too thick to realize is that im not intolerant of other peoples art. Im intolerant of dumb bitches bastardizing my hero. If you had kept the story simmilar but with the band more like, oh i dunno, the real bvb, maybe i would have liked it. Oh and have you ever noticed that your readers are all girls? That should say something

Look i never asked you to post your annoying defenses on my page. I gave you critisism just like was asked. Not my fault YOUR story sucks. But that is just my opinion. Your fangirls seem to enjoy it so in the future how about you dont start shit on peoples page because they said they didnt like it. You'll be hearing it a lot im sure

actually, I would. Know how they act that is.


and no a fanfic is a fictional story about real ppl. those arent real people. those are characters using and bastardizing the names of heroes. Especially, again, My CC

True but you kill all of them in it. Youre using their names for your characters. If you write a fic, make it both plausible and true to personality. CC is not weak and Jakie isnt bipolar. It just isnt believable and it makes it bad.

I stopped reading and i gave u my opinion. Dont ask for comments if you dont like megative critisism

Hey there (: Aha, just wanted to say I really love your writing, it inspired me to write my own Black Veil Brides fic. Just one thing I've noticed though. Your characters don't seem to react in a apodeictic way and it doesn't sit right with me a lot of the time, lacking realism etc.

Oh and;
You're fucking beautiful

12 hours until http://www.bvbfiction.com is up and running

ill keep you and the other bvb authors on here informed on when the site is officially up........lol....ive been promoting it all day to as many bvb authors as i can....

.......theres a soley bvb fanfiction site in the works.....if you want to help email here bvbfiction@gmail.com

Omas! ( oh my andy six haha) Please write more of We're all addicted to something to take the pain away if you can (: It's awesome!

Okie dok. I was just wondering.