Hi there! Just wanted to say I’m back on mibba and trying to get back into writing again. I hope you’ll check out my new story Kiss Me Before I Die - and do let me know if you have a story you’re looking for feedback on too!
Hey...you commented on one of my poems a while back,
and I forgot to say thank you...so I'm saying it now.
Thank you for liking my depressiveness.
Oh and your profile is awesome. Death note<3
Thanks for the story comment. Also, I know about the repitionion. I wanted it that way. But I did take out one of the repeats and left only the line I repeated at the begining and at the end. Itdoes sounds better.
Again, thanks. : )
I already know the relationship I want between Snape and my character,so yes you are right it's going to be there. I am splitting this one shot into a few parts, so I hope you stay tuned. Thank you for your advice! :]