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@ holtzmann
Yeah that makes a lot of sense! Especially as a character develops and the story plot becomes more elaborated it definitely can become a lot more difficult to keep up with it all!

Just glad you're going ahead with it all!

Yeah, the first story in 1st person was fine. But after that, the plot got more complicated and there was so much happening out of her immediate sight. And it was daunting to have to find a way to explain things while keeping her in the dark. And the third story starts with her just being not very aware of her surroundings at all. And it got really frustrating.

But yes! I'm excited! I'm hoping I'll get to add things I didn't get to elaborate on before. I'm excited to write it. :D

I know! I am the worst with those damn cliffhangers! But I blame the source material. Goddamn Marvel.

But I'm glad you liked it! I love explanation points! No worries!

:O

Well, I'm glad you got the urge to read! And that you read my stories!

And thank you! ^.^ I will definitely not stop anytime soon. I just love Bucky too much.

Thank you for the comment on Passionate Obsession.

Lol, awesome!

Even though I don't flaunt it, I do secretly like to get comments, lol.

I'm happy I could intrigue your interests. That makes me really happy.

Thank you for the comment on Paper Faces.

I'm happy you enjoyed my Chronicles of Sorrow. Right now, those stories are still driving me nuts a little. I think it's because I wrote all three of them within the space of a year, and I'm still taking a break from them. Don't get me wrong, I do love them, and the characters that I made in them, but I still need a break from them.

Passionate Obsession, however, is a sort of revival of The Darker Side of Passion. Even though my motivation right now is down to write, I do love it.

Anyway, I'm happy you're enjoying my stories. Thanks again for the comment on Paper Faces.

I'm happy you enjoyed Paper Faces and Broken Hearts. That story, along with Passionate Obsession are my two favorites right now. They're like my children a little, lol.

Well, because I have a bit on here, they all essentially revolve around the same theme, romance of some sorts. My older ones, particularly my Chronicles of Sorrow, which consists of The Darker Side of Passion, Lilies Painted Black, and Temptress of Paris, I'm not all that fond of. But also, they're completed, and it's kind of like they're dead and buried. I was rewriting The Darker Side of Passion, but I'm a little over it right now. But I'm not trying to discourage you from checking them out. They were, when I was writing them, my children also. But now, it's like they've grown up and moved out and we no longer keep in touch with each other.

As for suggestions, I would actually suggest all of them. But my two favorites right now are Paper Faces and Broken Hearts and Passionate Obsession.

Also, I want to apologize for my tangent above.

There's nothing wrong with that.

If you don't mind me asking, which story were you reading?

Thank you for the friend request.

Thank you for commenting! As always, drama's around the corner ;)

Thank you for the comment on Foundations. Hopefully I'll be able to write a new chapter soon, I've just been kind of stuck on what to have go on next and parts of it I want to edit.

I've just updated! Thank you for commenting, I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

Yeah she isn't really the slut haha, she's more of a...just a wedge, without knowing it driving Alex and Ali almost apart. That's how I see it haha.
But in Reserved I definitely agree with you on that one haha, but I do see what you're trying to do and it's definitely coming across. (:

It's never that hard to portray an asshole and you got Damien spot on! Haha.

But you were right, it made me want to jump through the screen less, but I still want to fuck Alex's shit up haha.

I am going quite well, dealing with mid-year exams at the moment, haven't even studied yet but I'm getting there lol.

P.S. I barely make my way around on here now, I do like the new Mibba, but so many changes!

Hahaha, I wouldn't really classify Lisa as a slut in TTWTR, but I know what you mean... I think everyone does it. But I'm not doing it to be spiteful, I actually have no problems with her, I think she's really pretty... it's just in Reserved especially it's kind of meant to represent how much she just wants things to be good between herself and Alex even though they may not be, kind of like any teenage relationship. But if it's coming across the wrong way then I suppose I should fix it haha. I think it may be a little over the top though because I'm trying to characterise her as the polar opposite of Ivy personality wise.

But yay, I know Damien's an asshole, so at least I portrayed that one right! haha

As for TTWTR, hopefully this next chapter makes you want to jump into the screen and fuck alex's shit up, less! haha
hope you're going wellll!

ps; is it just me or is this new mibba incredibly confusing to use at the moment? haha

hey love,
i just updated both TTWTR and Reserved, and I wanted to thank you for both of your comments, even though I think your one on TTWTR got lost in the server crash I'm sure I remember you commenting.
I'm super excited about Reserved even though it's posting slowly right now, but when it's more frequent (when I finish writing TTWTR) things should be good! Hope you're well, as per usual
xo

hay, please take a moment to check out my story: http://stories.mibba.com/read/455931/Sometimes-It-Lasts-In-Love/ - It would mean a lot to me. Thank you. And if you have any story you'd like read, do write back :)
- Thank you!

I should start proof reading but I'm far too lazy for that shit.

OMG! Fuck i've been doing that a lot lately. Josh/John their names are just so fucking similar!