mfaller / Comments

How are you doing? :}

Hahah, you deserved it. I find that it's harder to get story comments, actually. I guess it rains all over. :)

Oh my, I've just read all your comments on my poems. Thank you so muchhhhhhhhhhh. Wow. Thank you *redundantly repeats herself but ohhh myy*
I'm especially glad you liked Heart.less. I have a strong attachment to that poem, because for me, I know exactly what it's about. It's about something in our society that pisses me off so bad.

"I know I only understand the feelings of gluttony, secrets, manipulations, idleness, and attaching them to vivid images."

I like how you said it. I feel so accomplished getting those words from a reader. Because... with my poetry, I dont go so much for reader understanding what I wrote. It's about them getting to feel and think something... and what you felt approaches well what it all was meant to be about. Me telling you now what inspired that poem would probably destroy the magic of your interpretation.

Oh my, I've just read all your comments on my poems. Thank you so muchhhhhhhhhhh. Wow. Thank you *redundantly repeats herself but ohhh myy*
I'm especially glad you liked Heart.less. I have a strong attachment to that poem, because for me, I know exactly what it's about. It's about something in our sodiety that pisses off so bad.

"I know I only understand the feelings of gluttony, secrets, manipulations, idleness, and attaching them to vivid images."

I like how you said it. I feel so accomplished getting those words from a reader. Because... with my poetry, I dont go so much for reader understanding what I wrote. It's about them getting to feel and think something... and what you felt approaches well what it all was meant to be about. Me telling you now what inspired that poem would probably destroy the magic of your interpretation.

No! No it didnt seem creepy :) It just came so out of nowhere :)) Thank you so much!

... thank you :) It made me smile. It came so out of blue o.o Or was there any reason? I'm not even sure if I know you...

thanks for being supportive in such a difficult time. Leaving mibba will be difficult because of people like you. I hope you stick around for my last poem. I assure you it will be like nothing I have written before.

Unfortunately, I will be leaving mibba. Still, it will be fans like you that I'll miss when I go. Hopefully you'll be able to comment and leave feedback on the poems that are still up. My last poem "Sunshine for the Young at Heart" will be posted by the end of the month. For now, please read what poems I have left and compare thoughts with my journal entries. You're a fan I will never forget. Thanks for all the constructive criticism.

No problem. Your work is amazing, and deserves praise. It's sad how you do not get more comments on your stories. They should get more notice. It's obvious that you are very dedicated and think hard about your work.
You inspire me to better myself, and my writing. So I'd like to thank you for that, and the fact that your finishing your story I'm practically inlove with. ^_^

Your welcome. I like both chapters a lot so far, and I'm planning to stick with it

Thank you so much for the poem comment on my poem, Poem With No Meaning and you got the message of the poem really on point. Also it was directed towards songs that have no meaning or make no sense because I know a lot of people who listen to that kind of crap. Its like bad crack, that's what I call it. It's horrible but they can't stop listening/ reading (to) it.

Thank you for the story comment. I'm glad you like my writing, even if you don't like the story itself. XD

Thank you...again:3

Thanks for the story comment:) I tend to get errors because I hate reading what I've written so I don't re-read it:L

I do appreciate your commentary. On my poetry and my story. I've, uh, kinda given up on the story. We'll see what happens. But, yeah, thanks.

Hi, I just wanted to thank you for that comment you wrote on my poem. I didn't write it with the intention of receiving comments, but I appreciate that you left one regardless.

Also, I'd just like to tell you how great I find Moosey Metaphor. You have a great use of imagery leading to some really fantastic lines. Plus, you made me think-- as in you gave me some serious brain stimulation. There's just not enough of that these days.

Ah like, literally thank you so, so much for that story comment.
I am glad that you suggested some improvements because I need criticisms to get better, or not to sound too much like a pretentious twat, "grow as a writer".
I was writing this over two days and two different states of mind so that might go a way in explaining the way it all jarred and didn't quite fit aha.
Wo knows, someone may even get electrocuted next time aha ;)
Thanks again
:)

Thanks for the comment on the poem, I'm glad you connected with it. :)

Ohh. Haha, well uhh, thank you! :)

Thank you :)
And awh, I believe you're very talented as well! Your poetry is great.
And what do you mean? I have alot of poetry submitted. o.O