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  • rose4ARose

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    Okay awesome ^_^
    September 17th, 2008 at 04:19pm
  • Dysfunctional Beauty

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    Heey thanks for the add :)
    September 17th, 2008 at 09:31am
  • LiSwtSLaS

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    I understand what your saying. Yes you want the reader to think about it, I know how frustrating it can be when people give you comments such as "It was great" or "I absolutely loved it" and yet you know that they didn't take the time to think about what you've said, but you must also remember that not everyone goes through the same thought process as you. Infact the chances of people actually understanding the subtle metaphors you make are quite slim. When a person looks at something and their brain sees a "mistake" whether it was meant to be or not their brain will continue to look through the piece for more mistakes. Sometimes they will not truly focus on what you are saying but simply look for that "mistake".

    I understand that poetry IS a personal thing and ultimately will be written the way the writer wishes it to be but that does not mean you can throw the english language to the wind. I now understand why you did as you did but instead of showing importance to the word by capitalizing could you not have also explained it more in your piece. I'm not saying to spell it out in black and white but something that allows the readers thought pattern to move in the direction of the destination you've already reached.

    Please, please do not get me wrong I in no way ever would want to de-personalize poetry, nor would I wish to convince you that what you are doing is wrong I simply wish to tell you what I thought as an average reader looking through your poem. In my defense I must point out that if I feel this way about it then chances are someone else will too.

    Please do not worry about sounding rude for I am simply reading your words as your heart felt opinion and I do not think that someone speaking there mind is ever rude, for in essence it is their free right to cast their two cents. I feel that I must also tell you that now that I understand what you were trying to say with this poem the metaphors are fantastic yet still hard to catch if not explained. I am also truly sorry that I made you flustered for in no way was that the outcome I wanted. Please except my apologies in that regard.

    - Crayon Eater
    September 17th, 2008 at 03:39am
  • rose4ARose

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    Lucky you, i finished college at 3 today and by the time i caught a bus home i didnt get in through the front door until alf 4 :o it sucks big time. Awesome of course i'll contribute into it, what you want to know? what do i do? lol
    September 17th, 2008 at 01:12am
  • messyendings.

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    Thanks.
    And I already like it here. (:
    September 17th, 2008 at 12:36am
  • rose4ARose

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    Its brilliant its like: when your 12 you go into high school then your there till your 16...then your in college till whenever and then you have a choice to go to University then, which I am avoiding!! Day? Well I had college earlier which fried my head which led to a migraine. Now I’m just looking around sites for some good band names and looking for icons for the profile, brighten it up a little in it hehe.
    How bowt yours?

    -yell at me-
    September 16th, 2008 at 11:23pm
  • rose4ARose

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    Yer in the UK you start college when your 16 =] and well im still in college unfortunately lmao!!
    I’m doing art, and taking a photography course on the side too. I know that basically what most people do, but hey I love Art and I love photography and it totally rocks...Aww maan well I hope the decision for you becomes easi when the time comes other wise its going to be real hard to choose =[
    September 16th, 2008 at 10:53pm
  • rose4ARose

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    Yeah well I was willing to give it a go, but he said how much he loves me he doesn’t think it would work. Boys don’t like crying in front of people do they? Well he was crying =[
    Are you having fun researching on the charity?? We have to do like loads of research on artists and famous photographers in college etc. I don’t mind doing work in college but when they tell us we have to do it at home I wana scream, cause I like to go out or stay in and have a chill time lol.
    September 16th, 2008 at 05:09pm
  • rose4ARose

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    Homework blech I hate homework. Just the word makes me shiver and want to cripple up and die lmao!!
    Oh wow, well I just broke up with my lovely. He said he was going to be over his Dads in Scotland for at least a year to do with some job, and that it would be hard too keep relationship going. I know where he’s coming from, and its understandable…but its bloody hard lol I havent stopped crying yet =[
    I aint going mch, bored lmao
    You?
    September 16th, 2008 at 02:17am
  • rose4ARose

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    wow your site is just like awesomly layed out ^_^
    And HEY! im brilliant thanks, hows you??
    -ROSE-
    September 16th, 2008 at 01:47am
  • Evidence Will Kill

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    lol, sorry, I went to bed :P
    Haha, I like pink over brown for some reason... XD
    August 29th, 2008 at 01:17pm
  • RoastedHeart

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    Nice to meet you :P
    August 12th, 2008 at 12:06pm
  • RoastedHeart

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    I just realised you added me and i never said hi!
    so...hi! I'm hayley!
    thanks for the add :P
    August 11th, 2008 at 01:30pm
  • samantha;

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    Girly... you has one prettiful profile.
    It makes me smile.
    xD
    July 24th, 2008 at 04:00am
  • p'tite.

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    Yeah I know.
    You see, I met him when a friend of mine tried to set me up with her friend. He was apparently like a brother to her and whatnot. So I said I'd meet him if I it was okay that I brought some friends. She said he was fine with it and would bring a couple of his. So we met up, and I sorta kinda ended up falling for his best friend. >< Which he ended up being okay with in the long run, he was happy for us.
    But things didn't pan out and that fizzled within a couple weeks. And my self-esteem crumbled when he found a new girlfriend the next day. No joke.
    So.. yeah. I guess neither of us got over the other and we're stuck in the friends with benefits rut. Which I don't like, cause it's neither here nor there. And yet, at the same time, I don't want a real relationship.
    I hate when my life's too complicated for words. ><
    July 16th, 2008 at 08:08am
  • Mindless Popsicle;

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    It is really funny.
    && when I played it I spat the marshmellows all over my cousin ><
    Soo funny ! Have fun with it x]

    My favourite band.. . My Chemical Romance. ..
    Jeez I bet I shocked you there > >
    Lmao. .
    But my other favourite bands are. .
    Panic At The Disco, Nirvana, The Latency, Conversation but cheeyeah : )

    How about yours ? ^^
    July 16th, 2008 at 07:51am
  • Mindless Popsicle;

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    Summer school ?
    That kind of stinks. . I should have been going but I'm not >___>;
    Smores are uh-mazing ! Although I think I've only had em' once d:
    I was just recently told about it, its when you put one marshmellow in your mouth and then say chubby bunnie. .and then you repeat it several times.
    Its extremely amusing ><
    Baha, Blow pops are amazing. : )
    I love lollipops, but not as much as popsicles xD
    July 15th, 2008 at 11:53pm
  • p'tite.

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    Blech.
    I've been doing nothing as usual.
    It sucks. And I've sworn off boys.
    Err -- [i]relationships[/i] with boys.
    And I'm trying to figure out if kissing my best friend falls under said category. ><
    Guess that's something to ponder over the summer.. lol.
    Well, I spent most of my day, inside, (shocking!) and I went outside before to water the flowers. Cause they looked kinda sad. ):
    Maybe my mum'll be happy with me for that later and let me do something. xD
    Lucky duck! You went to the beach! :D
    [b]And a concert?![/b]
    Daaaaaaaaaaamn. My life sucks.
    Ahahaha.
    July 15th, 2008 at 11:00pm
  • Mindless Popsicle;

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    Hey !
    How are youu ? : )

    && do you like marshmellows ?
    Have you ever played chubby bunnie ? ><
    When was the last time you at a lollipop ? d:

    Sorry, I just had a fudgical, and I was reading you about me thingy and it siad you liked answering questions . .so yeah : )
    July 14th, 2008 at 09:38am
  • p'tite.

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    No problem, I don't answer back immediately all the time either. :)
    Not much, working on my current twoshot, it's coming along well.
    Whatcha been up to?
    July 12th, 2008 at 10:43pm