Hey, it's no problem! I'm really enjoying the story. I read the update on the bus, but now that I'm on my computer I can leave a comment. I really enjoyed the update though. I'll definitely let you know when the review's up! I've almost finished writing it so it just has to go through editing and stuff now. :)
I'm relatively new to Mibba (I joined last year but only started posting recently). I'm surprised you found it, because every time I search for my stories it doesnt show up.
I read your letter/chapter from better left unread. I just wanted to say that I had a friend who had something simlar happened to her. (This happened in middle school) Her boyfriend decided to end their relationship the day of their 1st year anniversary. She was crushed and became depressed. She lives at the families 2nd home for her parents were working in a different county. She did begin cutting. Well anyway, the main thing I wanted to say that I hope will help is. Give them your full attention when you see them. Text and/or call them every few hours to see how they are doing, talk about girl stuff to get their mind off boys. Let them know that someone(as in you) loves them. That family loves them too and even though its not their (ex)boyfriend. They still have many people that love them. I hope that maybe this helpped. And I don't know if you have already done this I'm just putting out what has worked for me.
I would love a sneak peek of the stories, and Im sure they're both amazing because so far I love everything you've written, but I do have to say that I've never been one for fan-fiction nor am I a huge twilight fan. I would still be happy to give my input on both if you'd like. Good luck on whichever you choose, with your talent they're sure to be great! :D
No prob, even though I don't have any stories here, I know it's great to have some feedback about your creations. :) And about the grammar, maybe you should try to find someone to check the spelling before you post them? An editor of sorts. I sometimes ask my sister to proofread the stuff I write, it's very useful :)