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Yes, I'll agree that it's a weird way to describe water, however, Ivan's weird and he says things that contradict itself. That's the way I've made him out to be so I'm afraid, no matter how weird what he said sounds to you, myself, or anyone else, I cannot change it because that's the way it's suppose to be; weird.

The "he was right though" used twice error was because I copied & pasted the edit into it and apparently didn't take it out, so thank you very much for pointing it out otherwise I would have probably only noticed weeks later. Also, thank you for pointing out the 5 forms of grab that were put into two sentences. I just re-read and I'm like, "No, that's too overwhelming. Must change it." However, I can't seem to find the "our backyard" tense error, could you please point it out? It might just be because I'm not the brightest when it comes to English tenses because we don't concentrate on them in English as much as we do tenses in French class.

Thank you very much for your comment, and I'm quite glad you enjoyed it. I'm happy that I was able to suck you into the world I created. I hope you want to read the rest of what I have to write for it, but if you don't, that's alright.

Again, thank you, and have a wonderful day/night (whatever time zone you're in). (:

You're welcome, i hope they end up together, that would be adorable. Yay, you're updating soon! Good, or else I'll die of curiosity! xD

Thank you so much for your advice. It helps me a lot. I shall fix my sentences. :) I am glad that you like my beginning :D

Thank you so much for your comment. It really means a lot.

Absolutely<3 The title. It started with two words, "To Yonder". I sat and thought about what I could write that would do that title justice. The idea of pirates with a brooding male character came to me and I fell in love with the prospect. I thought it was absolutely perfect and I'm glad you agree.
Truth be told, I wrote that summary because I had nothing else to put there and haven't thought about it since. I'll be sure to take a look and revise though.
Commas and period, my weak point. I'm an absolute killer for a a nice, juicy run on sentence. Ahaha. I'll be sure to try and edit. I'm not one to edit though... another major character flaw of mine.
I don't know how far you read (or how far you want to read), but the chapters do get longer, and more descriptive, as the chapters go on.
Well, I hope you enjoyed what you read (and what you will read, maybe...?). Thanks so much for your input !

Thank you for the comment :D
I understand what you mean about the whole waking up at the beginning of a chapter thing. It is quite cliche, but to be honest, I did it because I'm quite shit at starting stories, lol. I also did it to introduce the families.
And for the other thing about the conversations repeating, I used to do that so that you could see how different characters interpreted different things said and how they meant for things to mean, if that makes any sense, but I get how other things could be a bit more effective/more interesting.
Thanks for reading ^_^

So, I was reading your story. I love it by the by. And I saw in the last chapter that you're looking for new reading material. I have a pretty nice story going if you wanna check it out. ^^

Yes, there can be links in the summary. However, the rules for links in the summary are similar to those for stories. Linking to music, videos, and content needed to explain or for artistic reasons is fine. You probably won't get reported for a single link to a character picture, though you should use the characters function for that. Does that help?

Thank you so much for the advice!
I really need it. I have noticed that I switch past to present tense. I hate that I do that, but for some reason I do. I will edit it and get better at grammar and spelling. Thank you, again, so much! :D

Thank you so much for your comment on Bella! I really appreciate the feedback. I might go back and rewrite some of it one of these days.

And... um... did you do it for the comment swap thingamabobber?

Hm, so slashes.

An Unwanted Love is probably one of my favorites at the moment.
http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/416175/An-Unwanted-Love/

Corrupted Me is also good, but it hasn't been updated often in the past.
http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/332965/Corrupt-Me/

And A T T A C K ! tends to have good stories.
http://www.mibba.com/Member/156853/Stories/

Hope that fills your needs :D

Could you possibly link me to the contest? I lost it. xD

It's really cute, haha. My first tattoo is gonna be Cat Bus. :3

I'll find it, no worries. And I should hopefully have the fic up soon.

Alrighty, I am almost done with the entry.
It has phone sex
Can I please have a link?

Oh! You're very welcome. It's truly an amazing story. :)

You're very welcome. I believe that I just found it too and it was just in the mood. Really, it's fantastic, and I love it. :) Keep up your own pace I understand completely, I was just being silly haha. :) Have a lovely day :)

ahaa intense is always good :3

Still debating whether I like a guy in a cardigan. Some guys look good in them though, and for others, I'm just confused as to why they're wearing a cardigan, of all things. And this is what I got when I searched 'boy in cardigan':

http://tokyofashion.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/TK-2011-03-06-019-005-Harajuku.jpg

Totally digging her cardigan, haha.

Hello. You've entered ben ferry.'s and I's Slash Song Quote contest, and I wanted to let you know your entry is due in about ten days. Your quote is "Always chasing scars, never gets you far, an illusion; it's all just smoke and mirrors."

Mind reading some of my 1D stories? :)