Lol you weren't too harsh, I actually wouldn't have minded going a little harsher, but as it is a first draft I plan on fleshing things out a lot more.
Thank you so so so much for your comment on Ichor and Ambrosia! It really means a lot. I'll be sure to take your criticism into account when editing A lot of the early stuff you touched on in prologue & chapter 1 I am aware of and have been working on, just haven't posted to Mibba. But I will definitely reference your comment when I go in to edit the rest next month! Thank you I hope you enjoy chapter two even though its literally the worst and I am so ashamed I posted it!
EDIT: "Greek Cinderella" had me rolling it's so accurate
Oh gosh okay, Photobucket always eats ass at random times so that's definitely a relief! Like I just sighed so hard ahaha It's totally cool, thanks for letting me know that! I hope school gets less overwhelming soon ♥
@ pocahontas. OH NO. I did not change the pictures or anything so it must be an issue with photobucket. I'll check it out some time this week because I'm currently swamped with schoolwork. The gif layouts for your poems should be fine. So this was not intentional and I'll see if I can find what the issue is.
Hi! I wanted to let you know that your images for "Mapping Stars" have disappeared from my layout and ask that if you're deleting pictures or changing URL names from wherever you host, can you let me know? Two of my most important layouts - for the poems Ishki Taloa and Chukka - were made by you and it's going to break my heart if I lose those layouts.
@ pocahontas. Thank you I actually do that a lot. It's a fun little easter egg for people to discover when they're reading or going over their own stories.